Post by Brutus Aurelius on Jun 30, 2015 11:00:44 GMT -5
I feel like it would be a good idea to have a single place to discuss Tutorial dialog, especially considering the fact that some levels were refined and rebuilt.
And along that point, I feel like the dialong in the beginning of Level 3, the Power Grid mission, could be tweaked. The Engineer says that the relays are built "with triple redundancy". I think this could be tweaked a bit, as now the power relay doesn't have three power lines. It needs at least 7 operating power nodes. Perhaps it could be more along the lines of "These types of relays are built to have a failure tolerance", or something similar.
And along that point, I feel like the dialong in the beginning of Level 3, the Power Grid mission, could be tweaked. The Engineer says that the relays are built "with triple redundancy". I think this could be tweaked a bit, as now the power relay doesn't have three power lines. It needs at least 7 operating power nodes. Perhaps it could be more along the lines of "These types of relays are built to have a failure tolerance", or something similar.
