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Post by grävling on Mar 23, 2017 12:17:08 GMT -5
 s/arm/Arm/ |
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Post by grävling on Mar 23, 2017 12:33:41 GMT -5
 First of all, the screen should list what our reputation in the quadrant is. And in this particular case, we were minding our own business in our own declared faction's quadrant, and I think that deserves a mention as well. s/Ship Captain's Faction/Quadrant Owner's Faction/ all the 'The Captain's' s/The Captain's/Our/ s/Military/Military Rank/ |
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Post by fallen on Mar 23, 2017 13:09:24 GMT -5
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Post by grävling on Mar 23, 2017 14:03:22 GMT -5
showing fine for me. Not for you?
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Post by fallen on Mar 23, 2017 14:50:54 GMT -5
Second one is broken.
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Post by grävling on Mar 23, 2017 19:02:28 GMT -5
ah, renamed the screenshot and forgot to rename it here. Sorry!
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Post by grävling on Mar 24, 2017 2:49:40 GMT -5
 This description is all garbled. |
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Post by grävling on Mar 24, 2017 2:54:24 GMT -5
 s/the// |
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Post by grävling on Mar 24, 2017 3:03:14 GMT -5
 Really cool graphic. but you either want 'Skill test was successful' or the 'Hyperwarp Navigation was a success', I think. |
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Post by grävling on Mar 24, 2017 3:32:06 GMT -5
 s/safe travel for Scientist Darkwing/safety for Scientist Darwing's travel/ s/on-going/ongoing/ |
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Post by grävling on Mar 24, 2017 3:35:52 GMT -5
 s/BY LEVEL/LEVEL/ s/JOBS/JOB/ |
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Post by grävling on Mar 24, 2017 11:15:38 GMT -5
 s/<name>'/<name>'s> |
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Post by grävling on Mar 24, 2017 11:20:55 GMT -5
 s/allow/allows/ s/as/as in/ s/Rank 1 with the Steel Song/Rank 1 with Steel Song/ (only saw this as I make the post, so not circled) |
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Post by grävling on Mar 24, 2017 11:24:55 GMT -5
 s/the// s/of the law/under the law/ (under Shalun Law? under Trade Law?) |
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Post by grävling on Mar 24, 2017 11:48:11 GMT -5
 The second '0 Economy' should be 'Economy >= whatever_number_it_is' |
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