athios
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Post by athios on Mar 24, 2017 15:08:19 GMT -5
With him his assignment complete, Scout...
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Post by athios on Mar 24, 2017 15:10:27 GMT -5
Soldier Talent — Leader's Charge Umm... this whole thing is messed up. Self buffs with what? Missing period and space. Also, Restores (10 + Rifles) Morale
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Post by athios on Mar 25, 2017 2:37:42 GMT -5
Post ship combat screen. It would be great if instead of just [enemy profession], it could display [enemy faction] [enemy profession] (e.g. the Thulun Star Trader). This helps make Loot vs. Not Loot decisions, as sometimes after a long combat, I can no longer remember if they were Indy or not.
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Post by athios on Mar 25, 2017 3:00:42 GMT -5
Crew Combat display. I'm assuming the conditions are being displayed verbatim with text from the Talent descriptions. As a condition already applied on a person, it's better to say "Stunned" instead of "Stuns Target".
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Post by grävling on Mar 26, 2017 22:30:58 GMT -5
s/Knights Rest/Knights' Rest/ or /Knight's Rest/ depending on how many Knights there are.
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Post by grävling on Mar 26, 2017 22:51:03 GMT -5
s/higher value and more restricted goods/in the more restricted and generally higher-value goods/ s/the// s/the fee to license for/the license fee for/ (Not circled, at the top of all of this) s/service to the/service to/ s/allow/allows/ s/the// s/t pay those promotion's fee to gain/to purchase/ s/pay the fee to license/purchase/
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Post by grävling on Mar 26, 2017 23:13:46 GMT -5
This reads better as: We have completed our Patrolling assignment in this system. Our vigilance has guarded its shipping lanes and protected its commercial traffic.
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Post by grävling on Mar 26, 2017 23:18:26 GMT -5
The text on the card isn't helpful. Either leave it out altogether, letting 'Mission success' stand for itself, or add something like 'Our goals here have been accomplished.'
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Post by grävling on Mar 26, 2017 23:23:27 GMT -5
Merchants don't offer special gear.
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Post by grävling on Mar 26, 2017 23:32:31 GMT -5
s/Hyperwarp Navigation Skill test failed/Failed Hyperwarp Navigation Skill test/ (The way you have it written makes it sound as if some component failed, rather than your hyperwarp navigators failed a test.)
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Post by grävling on Mar 26, 2017 23:37:07 GMT -5
s/world of Clan/Clan/ (i.e. get rid of the first 'world of' -- you don't want two of them) s/Traders'd/Traders'/ s/Scout/the Scout/ s/the//
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Post by fallen on Mar 27, 2017 14:56:52 GMT -5
I want to extend a HUGE thank you to everyone who is diligently helping us improve the game's text, language, readability.
I know this is thankless, hard work. So let me say thanks.
All fixed!
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Post by athios on Mar 27, 2017 16:23:42 GMT -5
Log entry Missing % sign at end of sentence.
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Post by athios on Mar 27, 2017 16:42:48 GMT -5
Was just digging through old images to free up some space and noticed this from 1.0.25 If it hasn't been fixed already, then We arrived in time to save the sole survivor, an Officer who had jetisoned jettisoned in an escape pod. The officer Officer has joined our crew.
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Post by fallen on Mar 27, 2017 17:17:38 GMT -5
Thx fixed!
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