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Post by Sinocelt on Nov 2, 2017 8:52:36 GMT -5
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Post by fallen on Nov 2, 2017 9:32:43 GMT -5
added a bit to the wiki to clarify.
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Post by Sinocelt on Nov 2, 2017 12:45:02 GMT -5
"In the Farfallen Rim, the De Valtos won the right to operate the Syndicate Core, one of the richest worlds in the entire quadrant."
It is much clearer, and yet ... just "one of the richest worlds of one quadrant among many" doesn't sound impressive. I understand it is supposed to be impressive, from the simple fact that it is mentioned at all, but ...
"In the Farfallen Rim, the De Valtos won the right to operate the Syndicate Core, the richest world of one of the richest quadrants."
Like this?
Or am I misunderstanding something and the quadrant is the entire map? But that would clash with messages such as "this Quadrant supplies [one rare good or another]."
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Post by fallen on Nov 2, 2017 13:57:20 GMT -5
Nope, just talking about the Farfallen Rim Quadrant. The quadrant of classic ST RPG.
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Post by Sinocelt on Nov 2, 2017 14:48:58 GMT -5
OK. Then maybe it'll impress ST RPG players. But new players will wonder what's so great about having just one of the richest worlds out of ... just eleven.
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Post by fallen on Nov 2, 2017 14:52:21 GMT -5
One of the richest worlds in all the known quadrants?
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Post by Sinocelt on Nov 3, 2017 4:04:33 GMT -5
Yup, Now that sounds impressive.
(Edit applied to the Wiki.)
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