[2.3.1] Typos

[drspendlove]

Lose the "loose".

[fallen]

Thx fixed.

[daveal]

I am having a lot of fun with the pox story line. I found quite a number of typos, which is fine, and I volunteer again to proofread any text file you would trust me with.

1. Several typo/grammar issues in the mission to transport the immune murderer circled in red.  "As a hero among his people, we must be .." is a misplaced modifier, how about "Since he is a hero among his people, we must be...".  At the end of this screenshot, some words are missing, probably "we must be ready if his compatriots from the Hunna resistance attempt to rescue him"



2. In the conversation with the main doctor in Farfallen (how much of this is random, her name is Kaera Gouldbern in my game) "your" should be "you're"



3. Later in the murderer mission, same sentence missing "attempt to rescue him".  Not sure if it is the same string in the game or a cut/paste.  Also, reading the sentences together, it is odd that the last sentence is the one that gives an overview; maybe this sentence could be first.



4. Also in the immune murderer mission, the last sentence should be the first.  Also "weapon's" appears again and "As a hero" from #1.



5. The planet and the object seem reversed in this sentence.



6. "Alleyway" should be one word

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7. Several problems in the pox jumper mission screen.  "Needs to be moved" in the first circle, probably remove "with" in the second circle.



8. Reversed planet and object in the plague corpse mission

[drspendlove]

Not a typo, per se, but I'm not sure you want to count every naval encounter as a combat, but they're tracked that way on the death screen. Rewording might be prudent. I only had 3 battles or so.

[daveal]

Whee ...

1. Crimson pox has 4 names.  Sometimes MX11 (one time) and sometimes MX1 (multiple times).  MX11 in the conversation with Dr Gouldbern where she reveals that she has a resource intensive treatment (I think, triggered by reaching 25% on the plague scale)



2. On the left, "carried against unknown" is not a  typo, but probably should fill in something.  On the right, capitalization of Basalt is missing, and "mosses" is plural but a phrase like "The samples of basalt mosses are thoroughly sealed" or "the Basalt Mosses are thoroughly sealed"



3. Same plural of basalt mosses and capitalization, same possible solutions



4. Should be "experiments"



5. Missed previously, remove "be"



6. Not a typo exactly, but the first and second descriptions don't seem to go together.  The summary says that Yun went to a wilderness to collect samples. The 1.1 description says she went to the hunna seeking medical supplies.

[fallen]

On #6. adjusted that description to be more clear -- "... to Hunna raiders who attacked seeking medical supplies ..."

Thanks for all the reports! And for one thread, so much easier for me.

[daveal]

Last report of first plague playthrough. In Dr Gouldbern's closing speech, after curing the plague, I think some of the thought balloon arrows are mixed up; are all four of these lines hers or is one supposed to be from the captain?  Also her last sentence doesn't quite make sense.

[fallen]

Many thanks, fixed!

[fallen]

Jul 2, 2018 22:12:54 GMT -5 drspendlove said:

Not a typo, per se, but I'm not sure you want to count every naval encounter as a combat, but they're tracked that way on the death screen. Rewording might be prudent. I only had 3 battles or so.

Thx fixed.

[drspendlove]

Hard to move patience.

[fallen]

Jul 3, 2018 22:12:15 GMT -5 drspendlove said:

Hard to move patience.

Oh how all my attempts at humor fall dead.

Just like this one

Fixed

[daveal]

First infection popup deliver should be delivery

[drspendlove]

Just one journal?

[fallen]

Thx fixe.d

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