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Post by drspendlove on Apr 24, 2019 13:56:08 GMT -5
Talent: Rip Chord --> Rip Cord
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Post by fallen on Apr 24, 2019 19:54:21 GMT -5
"Ripcord" already in production version of the game.
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Post by drspendlove on Apr 24, 2019 21:08:17 GMT -5
Oh. I was going off of the wiki. Sorry.
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Post by fallen on Apr 24, 2019 21:11:52 GMT -5
Woops, will get that updated!
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Post by grävling on Apr 25, 2019 3:48:50 GMT -5
s/You/You've/
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Post by fallen on Apr 25, 2019 11:27:11 GMT -5
fixs
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Post by grävling on Apr 25, 2019 23:07:18 GMT -5
s/the Rychart/Rychart/
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Post by grävling on Apr 25, 2019 23:19:17 GMT -5
s/lost/also lost/
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Post by fallen on Apr 26, 2019 9:33:34 GMT -5
Tfix
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Post by dmesse on Apr 28, 2019 2:07:25 GMT -5
Hello folks, if you don't mind I'd like to put in a small typo report in here as well.
It's on the mission text from one of Arbiter Estelle Brokstrom's missions.
Timeline: 3rd Era Mission Contact: Estelle Brokstrom Mission Name: United Defense Force
The typo is in the mission summary text block.
"While United Coalition is ratified, [permissino] to gather a unified military force ..."
It looks like it should be put in as "permission" instead. =)
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Post by fallen on Apr 28, 2019 12:52:28 GMT -5
Thx fixed!
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Post by grävling on Apr 30, 2019 9:34:05 GMT -5
s/any and all spacers who passes/every spacer that passes/ s/we are caught/we are caught snooping,/ s/we may have a fight on our hands with security/the local security may respond violently/ --> or something that indicates that this is the sort of fight that gets you shot and not the sort that gets you into an argument for a loss of rep.
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Post by fallen on Apr 30, 2019 12:58:16 GMT -5
fxi
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Post by grävling on May 3, 2019 17:36:31 GMT -5
I think that 'figurehead' is the wrong word here. A figurehead is a puppet, somebody who appears to hold the power but is really being manipulated by somebody else, or, more usually a group of somebodies. Brokström is the 'iconic head', or the 'recognisable leader', or the 'foremost advocate', or 'acknowledged leader' or 'the human most indentified with' the Coalition -- if she is really calling the shots, and leading the thing. If not she is it's 'foremost spokesman', or even 'celebrity spokesman'.
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Post by grävling on May 3, 2019 17:45:59 GMT -5
s/was put on a short stint/was treated to a short stint/ <-- if you want to be ironic /suffered a short stint/ <-- if you don't though I like 'the city had to be placed under martial law for a brief period' better than the second in that case.
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