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Post by grävling on Jan 8, 2013 6:09:26 GMT -5
True: s/or a place/-- that's a place/ s/where the good rest while/where large quantities of goods rest before/ s/smaller groups/smaller lots/ s/its guarded/it's guarded/
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Post by grävling on Jan 8, 2013 7:14:10 GMT -5
mercer: s/to a fervor your might/to a fervor, you might/ s/because they fail or refuse to/because they cannot or will not/ (confusion between failing in a mission, or in life vs fail to take into consideration, here) s/more logic than I am beast/more logical than I am beastly/
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Post by Ahab on Jan 8, 2013 12:39:51 GMT -5
Flashback in the Whitey fight 'watch your six'?? I don't understand what this means. I think I agree with you that this should be changed to be more understandable by the general population, especially internationally. But in case anyone else was wondering: 'watch your six' is a military slang term. You may know that the military frequently refers to directions by clock numbers, with "12 o'clock" being straight ahead, "3 o'clock" to the right, etc. So, 'watch your six' means "watch your rear", a frequently useful piece of advice.
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Post by grävling on Jan 9, 2013 3:09:42 GMT -5
Flashback in the Whitey fight 'watch your six'?? I don't understand what this means. I think I agree with you that this should be changed to be more understandable by the general population, especially internationally. But in case anyone else was wondering: 'watch your six' is a military slang term. You may know that the military frequently refers to directions by clock numbers, with "12 o'clock" being straight ahead, "3 o'clock" to the right, etc. So, 'watch your six' means "watch your rear", a frequently useful piece of advice. Ah, thank you.
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Post by Cory Trese on Jan 9, 2013 4:21:48 GMT -5
Andrew and I have historically spent a lot of time working with military folks and have a lot of bad slang habits. You should hear our nonsense chatter when we are out after dark in the streets of NBZ. You might need a translator (and an editor too, probably, to piece it back together.)
We're working on these and the suggested dialog expansions for upcoming releases.
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Post by Ahab on Jan 9, 2013 8:37:35 GMT -5
Heaven: s/Maybe its because he is more metal/Maybe it's because he is more metal/ s/helping you stay away and sharp/helping you stay awake and sharp/
Luka: s/You are Knight now, now and forever./You are a Knight now, now and forever./
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Post by fallen on Jan 9, 2013 20:36:00 GMT -5
'in the yellow area'? I don't have a yellow area. Is this a planned feature? grävling - changing this to say "in the light green squares" because that is the actual color. You do see the difference for the short-combat-move area, right?
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Post by fallen on Jan 9, 2013 20:41:38 GMT -5
grävling - you are a SAINT. thank you so much for all the typos, I have integrated all these fixes into the dialog.
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Post by Cory Trese on Jan 10, 2013 3:02:56 GMT -5
grävling - you are a SAINT. thank you so much for all the typos, I have integrated all these fixes into the dialog. A SAINT of CK. Can't thank you enough for your patient input, tireless support and enthusiastic suggestions. Uploading a release chock full of your fixes right now
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Post by grävling on Jan 10, 2013 4:18:02 GMT -5
'in the yellow area'? I don't have a yellow area. Is this a planned feature? grävling - changing this to say "in the light green squares" because that is the actual color. You do see the difference for the short-combat-move area, right? Yes, but interestingly enough, it never occurred to me that this had anything to do with the short move area. I just thought it make it easier to count how many squared away the bad guys were. :-)
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Post by grävling on Jan 10, 2013 4:19:19 GMT -5
canonization will have to wait....I have been too busy the last few days to get to work on the typos.
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