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Post by grävling on Jan 10, 2013 4:56:17 GMT -5
Okay, I will start a new Knight and see how the fixes worked out.
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Post by grävling on Jan 10, 2013 5:09:47 GMT -5
Big Dig Taxi Co: s/anywheret/anywhere/ s/Cause I know/'Cause I know/
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Post by grävling on Jan 10, 2013 5:14:33 GMT -5
Luka s/when you have questions or advice/when you have questions or need advice/ s/to embrace to/to embrace/ s/on keeping the most/acquiring the most/ s/in the NBZ/in the NBZ, and keeping it up to date./ the button s/Finally, its NBZ/Finally, it's NBZ/ s/Los Valentinos areas/Los Valentino area/ s/I'm there puppet/I'm their puppet/ s/Maybe among/Among/ s/gangs and criminal organization/gangs and criminal organizations/ s/its their/it's/ s/will find most/will most likely run into./ -------------- She says nothing about rumours, and she should. ----------------- s/but its pretty rare/but that's pretty rare/ Why 2 buttons? 'Yes' and 'Sure' ;D
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Post by grävling on Jan 10, 2013 5:21:51 GMT -5
Max Mercer: s/We all got what we needed, but we don't want to rely on them unless its absolutely necessary at the moment./ So they are necessary, but not trustworthy. We only use them sparingly, when there really is no other choice./ s/Please alert Luka or I/Please alert Luka or me/ s/Most of it yes/Most of it, yes/ s/You need to sleep regularly to stay alert or wake./There are drugs you can take to stave off exhaustion for a time, but mostly you need to sleep regularly./ s/If you do not, you will become Exhausted// (this sentence is redundant.)
s/combats/combat/ s/You are also ...troublesome Encounter/Surviving Encounters is also much more dangerous and difficult when you are Exhausted, as you will find that your skills are significantly degraded when you are in that state./ s/Simmers/Stims/ s/to their tactic/through their tactic/
s/Fennian connector/Fennian Connector/
s/he is in charge of your in charge of your/he is in charge of your/
s/your might say/you might say/ s/Because they do not/Because they carelessly do not/ s/provide for you/provide you/ s/to have approval of/to have the approval of/ s/faster, strong/faster, stronger/ s/I can see Mallor/I can see that Mallor/ s/but also it seems that they lose/but it seems that they also lose/ s/gain less and less Experience/lose the capability to gain Experience. Each point in DV makes it less likely that you can learn from your experiences in the world./
s/Scissor/Scissors/
s/Some drivers are more risky, but most will refuse you over a pretty low Heat/Most drivers are extremely risk-adverse, and will refuse to pick you up if you have even a small amount of heat./ s/high risk/high-risk/ s/like escorting/such as escorting/.
This talk of cool down is rubbish -- it is the game designer talking about his implementation, not an ingame message.
So:
Also, they are all very busy. You can be sure that as soon as they drop you off they will be on their way to their next destination. So you will have to wait a while after you use a taxi before you can use them again.
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Post by grävling on Jan 10, 2013 5:25:26 GMT -5
Heaven Pharma s/tend your physical/tend to your physical/ s/out of the tunnels/out of the Fennian tunnels/ fallen says -- I COMPELTED TYPO FIXES UP TO HERE
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Post by grävling on Jan 10, 2013 6:29:46 GMT -5
Tunnel Guns s/in it that gives it/that gives it/ (you already said 'built-in') s/high Ballistics/a high Ballistic rating/ s/with high Ballistic/with high Ballistics/ s/firearms, guns, bullets/ranged damage/ s/can help against that/shields you from the worst damage/ s/that have Penetration/greater Penetration values./ s/Penetration .... helps prevent this as well/Weapons that have large Penetration values slice right through soft armour like butter. But Hardended armour will absorb much of the damage, so it won't affect you. It may also limit your mobility -- but like I said, It's too bad that I don't have any in stock right now. /
s/its between melee/it's between melee/ s/more attacks a turn/more attacks in a turn/ s/you can possibly get attacks/ you could possibly get 2 attacks/ BY THE WAY, what's with this 'possibly'? stuff? the only way you can have fewer than 2 attacks is if you are out of ammo, no? -- I'd drop the possibly.
s/Weapons like lighter melee/Lighter melee/ s/If you are using a firearm, it requires/All firearms require/ s/one of three types of Ammo/ones of the three types or ammo/ (note 2 changes)
s/during combat./at all times. You would hate to run out during combat./
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Post by grävling on Jan 10, 2013 6:38:08 GMT -5
Frederic Flynn s/onto the next thing/forward/ (we already used next in that sentence) s/have to finish each on/have to finish each one/ s/either need to/need to/ (or change /pick up a package, whatever/ to /or pick up a package, or whatever /
s/stirred the bee's nest/stirred up the bees' nest/ (note 2 fixes)
s/cause next up/'cause next up/ s/an education in weaponry/an education in the weaponry/ s/from gang-wars/from the gang-wars/ s/up in his head, he can/up in his head. He can/ s/its all real/it's all real/ s/its easier than killing/it's eaiser than killing/ s/could be important/could be doing important/ s/free reign/free rein/
s/keep in mind, I have other work too/keep in mind, I have other jobs I need to move, too/ s/because I have a lot of important work to get done around here./and if you want to have the cream of my crop, you are going to have to do some of my grunt work as well. That's just how it goes./ s/the most dangerous/some of the most dangerous/
s/If you are still down in the tunnels/ -- what does this mean? Well, if you ever come back to the tunnels? If you ever want some work in the tunnels? or If you decide to stay in the tunnels a little longer, and earn some more cash before heading to the NBZ?
I don't understand 'still' here.
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Post by grävling on Jan 10, 2013 6:50:54 GMT -5
Holly her store description s/darlin/darlin'/ s/its sure to lead/it's sure to lead/
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Post by Ahab on Jan 10, 2013 8:50:08 GMT -5
s/its between melee/it's between melee/ s/more attacks a turn/more attacks in a turn/ s/you can possibly get attacks/ you could possibly get 2 attacks/ BY THE WAY, what's with this 'possibly'? stuff? the only way you can have fewer than 2 attacks is if you are out of ammo, no? -- I'd drop the possibly. Is this in the context of combo attacks? If so, I believe the statement is correct. It is possible to get only 1 attack out of a Speed 2 weapon, even if you have enough ammo and you don't kill the target with the first shot. I've seen it happen.
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Post by Ahab on Jan 10, 2013 8:52:16 GMT -5
I just saw this in 0.9.3--not sure whether it is still in 0.9.5 (didn't know there was an update this morning!): Luka: s/a taste for chrome, as you we need it/a taste for chrome, as you will need it/
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Post by fallen on Jan 10, 2013 8:58:04 GMT -5
s/its between melee/it's between melee/ s/more attacks a turn/more attacks in a turn/ s/you can possibly get attacks/ you could possibly get 2 attacks/ BY THE WAY, what's with this 'possibly'? stuff? the only way you can have fewer than 2 attacks is if you are out of ammo, no? -- I'd drop the possibly. Is this in the context of combo attacks? If so, I believe the statement is correct. It is possible to get only 1 attack out of a Speed 2 weapon, even if you have enough ammo and you don't kill the target with the first shot. I've seen it happen. It is correct. You don't always get every attack -- there are situations in which it goes really wrong and you don't get your full shots or the extra shot that Aim can add.
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Post by grävling on Jan 10, 2013 9:51:29 GMT -5
Is this in the context of combo attacks? If so, I believe the statement is correct. It is possible to get only 1 attack out of a Speed 2 weapon, even if you have enough ammo and you don't kill the target with the first shot. I've seen it happen. It is correct. You don't always get every attack -- there are situations in which it goes really wrong and you don't get your full shots or the extra shot that Aim can add. Ah, ok then. My mistake.
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Post by fallen on Jan 10, 2013 9:59:29 GMT -5
grävling - don't worry, I am still putting you in for canonization! =P ============ TYPOS ARE NOW FIXED TO HERE =============
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Post by grävling on Jan 10, 2013 11:57:38 GMT -5
Mallor True:
s/I know you were too/I know you were one, too/ s/So first/So first,/ s/fair warning, it's/a fair warning. It's/ s/getting good jobs/doing good work/ s/it a little more/things a little more/
Maybe 'if I get banged up' should be: Mallor: how do I prepare for a fight? Then we could stick the 'stim yuourself up to 10 or more' advice there. s/You're best option/Your best option/ s/as you became a Knight/when you became a Knight/
s/are a solider for the megacorps/were a soldier for a megacorp/ (note 2 changes) s/He connects soldiers with jobs. That's you and me./He connects soldiers -- that's you and me -- with jobs./ s/he stays safe/and all the while he stays safe/ s/I'm done for now/I'm done lecturing for now/ s/need help/need some help/ s/careful giving him/be careful giving him/
s/come back to me, I will/come back to me. I will/ s/for you to complete/for you to do, to complete/
s/Your speed of movement in combat/The maximum distance that you can travel in each combat move/ Speed of movement is exactly the wrong term to use. It makes people think of how quickly they can fire a gun, get it out of the holster, all sorts of wrong things.
s/stay a night at a hotel if you need to,/rest up in this hotel, if you need to, so you will arrive sharp and ready for a full day's adventure./ s/as the thug is only hired for the day./Remember that the thug is only hired for one day./
s/intimate into my business/intimate with my business/
s/Remember to use your defensive moves -- dodge and defend/ Don't you mean 'evade and cover'? defend is the do-nothing, and dodge we do not have any more. Or 'block' for melee combat, not cover
s/You're respect means a lot/Your respect means a lot/ s/Flynn called me in on a personal/Flynn called in a personal/ s/Thanks for the advice, I will./ ? huh ? non-sequitur. Maybe 'Thanks for the advice, I will remember it? or I will look you up some day?/
I'd end it with Mallor saying "Good luck soldier. And remember, always watch your back." myself. This seems a bit abrupt.
Also, did he say he would be in the Mars backrooms? But there is only one, no? Golden Flower Restaurant?
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Post by grävling on Jan 10, 2013 12:06:13 GMT -5
Whitey s/old fashioned/old-fashioned/
Note: Mallor is giving me advice on how to shoot Whitey full of bullets and not letting him close with me. But I am a cybersword. I _want_ to close with him. The Cybersword dance is -- let him use all his AP getting close to you. Whack him. Then run away. Repeat until your opponent is dead.
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