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Post by Ahab on Jan 13, 2013 18:24:43 GMT -5
Dickson: s/which has a Speed of 2, you can possibly get attacks/which has a Speed of 2, you can possibly get 2 attacks/
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Post by Ahab on Jan 13, 2013 18:26:40 GMT -5
Mercer: s/For now, e is in charge of your job/For now, he is in charge of your job/
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Post by grävling on Jan 13, 2013 19:00:09 GMT -5
New start with Luka
s/I can come on foot/I can come in on foot/
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Post by Ahab on Jan 13, 2013 19:06:45 GMT -5
Flynn: s/We pick and chose our fights,/We pick and choose our fights/
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Post by grävling on Jan 13, 2013 19:14:14 GMT -5
Gaslamp s/If you have less than 25 credits/If you have fewer than 25 credits/
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Post by grävling on Jan 13, 2013 19:16:44 GMT -5
Big Dig Taxi s/I know whom you are working for/I know for whom you are working/ (indeed, if he says 'may' and 'whom' he will not want to end a sentence with a preposition, either... )
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Post by Ahab on Jan 13, 2013 19:37:10 GMT -5
Mercer: s/Because they careleslly do not plan./Because they carelessly do not plan./
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Post by grävling on Jan 13, 2013 21:31:29 GMT -5
Holly s/its sure to lead to trouble/it's sure to lead to trouble/
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Post by Ahab on Jan 13, 2013 22:03:44 GMT -5
Flynn: s/pummel the person into unconscious./pummel the person into unconsciousness./
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Post by fallen on Jan 14, 2013 1:27:15 GMT -5
All typos reported in this thread so far are fixed for the next release.
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Post by grävling on Jan 14, 2013 2:27:48 GMT -5
Vault Mission s/From here out/From here on out/
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Post by grävling on Jan 14, 2013 5:17:37 GMT -5
s/Come one crate/Come on, crate/
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Post by grävling on Jan 14, 2013 7:52:32 GMT -5
Joshua s/I need a ride to Black Row/I need a ride to the Black Row/
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Post by grävling on Jan 14, 2013 15:23:24 GMT -5
Luka s/you will work a with Mercer and some contacts we will provide to you/you will work with Mercer and some contacts we will provide you/ (note 2 changes) s/move on to a BraveStar/move on to work for a BraveStar/ s/high paying/high-paying/ s/It's shops surpass/Its shops surpass/
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Post by grävling on Jan 14, 2013 18:20:09 GMT -5
Max Mercer s/when you are Exhausted, as you will find that your skills are significantly degraded when Exhausted/when you are Exhausted, as you will find that your skills are significantly degraded/ (one 'when you are Exhausted' is enough for one sentence) s/I feel safe wiring down a V-Chip/I feel safe in doing so/ (one 'Wiring down a V-chip' is enough for two sentences)
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