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Post by LordofSyn on Mar 23, 2013 9:08:00 GMT -5
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Post by ntsheep on Mar 26, 2013 12:50:50 GMT -5
Just wanted to say thanks to all that have been reading my little story. Feel free to comment if you like. Point out my grammar errors, tell me it is crap. I do not mind  We all need constructive criticism from time to time. There will be more soon. |
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paxdad
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Post by paxdad on Mar 26, 2013 16:49:48 GMT -5
Thank you for posting ntsheep! I am trying to get around to reading some more of these. There are is really quite a lot of fiction on these boards. Really dig that these games spark so much imagination in all of us. |
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Post by triedge on Oct 27, 2013 23:56:03 GMT -5
is this thread is connected to the corrupt file segment i found in the NBZ?
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Post by ntsheep on Dec 16, 2013 16:54:38 GMT -5
is this thread is connected to the corrupt file segment i found in the NBZ? no, it is just a fan based story I am working on based on one of my knights. hope to have some updates here soon. |
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Post by Swami on Mar 11, 2014 14:41:22 GMT -5
/then their/then they're/
/Their protecting/They're protecting/
/fell/feel/
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Post by ntsheep on Mar 11, 2014 15:36:18 GMT -5
/then their/then they're/ /Their protecting/They're protecting/ /fell/feel/ Thanks Swami, I'll get to the edits later. |
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Post by rabidbite on Mar 11, 2014 18:21:02 GMT -5
/then their/then they're/ /Their protecting/They're protecting/ /fell/feel/ Thanks Swami, I'll get to the edits later. Ha! He does that to me too, but I know he wouldn't if he didn't care. Plus, he's been right every single time. *sigh*  rabid |
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Post by Jacob on Mar 13, 2014 17:52:13 GMT -5
s/gone to far/gone too far Note: Ya wrote this thing damn well, I've gotta admit. Might as well print and bind it like a book like I'm doing with Cerberus once it's done. For Rabid, I've already got a nice front cover set up. I wonder if dayan would like to draw stuff for these novels...  Sent from my broken HTC Desire C using proboards. Anyone's got a fan? |
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Post by ntsheep on Mar 14, 2014 7:19:48 GMT -5
Jacob, thanks for the catch. Hard to believe I use to get mostly A's in English lol. There are certain words that always give me trouble. I usually spend a few hours wondering if I used the right ones, why the English language has so many words that sound the same when spoken but are spelt differently I'll never know.
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Post by rabidbite on Mar 14, 2014 10:17:30 GMT -5
Mine is where and were. Actually, now that I think about it, I screw up all the time. But its fun to write.  rabid |
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Post by Officer Genious on Mar 14, 2014 23:34:59 GMT -5
Jacob, thanks for the catch. Hard to believe I use to get mostly A's in English lol. There are certain words that always give me trouble. I usually spend a few hours wondering if I used the right ones, why the English language has so many words that sound the same when spoken but are spelt differently I'll never know. Ahem. Jacob, thanks for the catch. Hard to believe I use d to get mostly A's in English , lol. There are certain words that always give me trouble. I usually spend a few hours wondering if I used the right ones . Why the English language has so many words that sound the same when spoken but are spelt differently I'll never know. Hehe, couldn't resist. But I get sloppy on forums myself so I just pull out spell and grammar checks to make people smile. Or to derail conversations. So then... |
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Post by ntsheep on Mar 15, 2014 18:30:45 GMT -5
Though I find you to be somewhat of a smart ass  , I still give a like and a karma point to you Officer Genious. With you and Swami at our sides, us writers should one day be very good at our jobs . |
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Post by Officer Genious on Mar 15, 2014 18:45:37 GMT -5
Though I find you to be somewhat of a smart ass , I still give a like and a karma point to you Officer Genious. With you and Swami at our sides, us writers should one day be very good at our jobs . I prefer being a genious. And I enjoy getting that compliment from a smartsheep. |
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Post by ntsheep on Mar 15, 2014 20:09:06 GMT -5
Though I find you to be somewhat of a smart ass , I still give a like and a karma point to you Officer Genious. With you and Swami at our sides, us writers should one day be very good at our jobs . I prefer being a genious. And I enjoy getting that compliment from a smartsheep. I that case, I suggest a name change from "Officer" to "Wild E." Have another karma. |
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We all need constructive criticism from time to time. There will be more soon. 
, I still give a like and a karma point to you