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Post by bobc on Sept 5, 2015 14:56:07 GMT -5
Galentia Cross Extermination by Fire: Opening briefing (yellow text) "Our Hydra Templar can use up their Napalm Charge Talents and will still be able to exterminate out the targets" Should this be "exterminate the targets" or "exterminate our targets"?
Extermination by Fire: Star Trader camp (blue text) "When the extermination is over, we will crawl this camp for clues - perhaps we can hunt the Star Trader down and prevent the next disaster" Should this be "we will trawl this camp for clues" or "we will crawl over this camp for clues"?
Righteous Fallen Kathos dialogue about new colonies "From what we've heard from the Star Traders, they are starting to be pockets of Independent activity" Should this be "there are starting to be"?
Kathos dialogue about smuggling xeno artifacts out of Galentia Cross This dialogue uses the Luthor portrait, not Kathos
Luthor briefing on the Ferarai Lance mission "That was enough dissuade the good Captain from taking his crew down to investigate further" Should this be "enough to dissuade"?
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Post by fallen on Sept 5, 2015 21:25:29 GMT -5
Thanks, fixed!
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