Post by tenbsmith on Sept 22, 2015 11:25:40 GMT -5
Exciting to see this on Steam.
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The Templars marches to war tonight! Templar Battleforce mixes precision tactics in turn-based style with strategic army building in a turn-based style. You'll face challenging enemies and immense bosses in over 45 combat scenarios. But that is why you are a Templar Captain. You're Lineage runs back 87 generations., and t The experience of your ancestors those who came before you are like your own. They flows in your muscles like memory, they echoes in your thoughts, the and guides your swing and your step.
Join us on the field of battle, Templar!
As is customary for the Trese Brothers, expect updates quickly. Please report bugs or suggest features, we will be prompt in improving the game.
As is also customary for the Trese Brothers, expect new expansions of content coming soon, all included in your original sticker price.
Get Templar Battleforce whileit is on for 15% off during the launch sale!
Below, I provide some copy editing suggestions in bolded red for the current main post at this URL:
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The Templars march
Join us on the field of battle, Templar!
As is customary for the Trese Brothers, expect updates quickly. Please report bugs or suggest features, we will be prompt in improving the game.
As is also customary for the Trese Brothers, expect new expansions of content coming soon, all included in your original sticker price.
Get Templar Battleforce while
