Typos in v1.0.15

[grävling]

Feb 1, 2017 23:38:22 GMT -5 johndramey said:

Well in that case, I'll just pick up where you left off.

Assign Attributes screen (in template creation)
s/ At this priority, your Attributes are minimum XX and maximum YY/ ... minimally XX and maximally YY -or- ... have a minimum of XX and a maximum of YY

What you want to say is that /Each attribute must have a value between XX(min) and YY(max)/

[johndramey]

Pick your Ship screen (in template creation)

Juror Class
s/The Juror class .../ The Juror Class
s/...crewed by 16, the Juror class .../... carrying 16 crew, the Juror Class ...

Paladin Cruiser
s/The Paladin cruiser ... / The Paladin Cruiser
s/... dual Hellfire Torpedoes, the Paladin takes 20 crew./... the Paladin Cruiser carries 20 crew.

Frontier Liner
s/... the Frontier Liner is responsible for discovery of .../... for the discovery of ....
s/Armed with Hellfire torpedoes, the Liner carries .../ Armed with Hellfire Torpedoes, the Frontier Liner carries....

Fidelis Cutter
s/Blocky and hard to kill, the Fidelis is .../... the Fidelis Cutter is....
s/Armed with an Mk-Alpha torpedo, the Fidelis takes 28 crew.../Armed with a Mk-Alpha Torpedo, the Fidelis Cutter carries 28 crew

Guardian Interceptor
s/...alike, the Guardian is .../...the Guardian Interceptor is ...

Seems like you want to use the ship's full name in its description, so I went through and checked for that. Also, tried to even out consistency on the takes/carries/crewed by/etc. a little bit.

[johndramey]

grävling, that seems totally fine to me. I'm used to working in editing translations by Korean and Japanese folks, which means I'm absolutely not allowed to insert words that are not there and absolutely must use all words that are there, regardless of the intent of the sentence.

fallen, I'm going to be running through everything and basically pointing out consistency issues with names/capitalization and little nitpicky stuff like that, so feel free to disregard anything I say if it a)seems too niggling, b)is irritating, or c)is not what you want to say.

[johndramey]

Pick Contacts screen (in template creation)

Smuggler
s/Knowing something with.../Knowing someone with...

Merchant
s/Having a friend at he in your pocket Exchange ... Trader Permits... to raise or increase prices./Having a friend in your pocket at the Exchange ... Trade Permits... to raise or lower prices.

Weapons Dealer
s/...albiet at a price above./albeit at a commiserate price.

Warrant Officer
s/..politics of bounties, capture, and assassination.../bounty hunting, capturing, and assassinating (?)

Prison Warden
unfinished

[johndramey]

That's all for now, folks. Please let me know if you find this stuff helpful, as I'm more than happy to continue working my way through (what I'm sure will be) reams of type written stuff in ST2 if you do.

[johndramey]

I lied!

Selling Cargo screen (on planet)

When selling
s/Rep will gained/Rep will be gained

[Brutus Aurelius]

Storyteller trait.

s/Know for spinning engage tales the cracking hilarious jokes/Known for spinning engaging tales and cracking hilarious jokes

[Alex Fury]

I don't recall seeing a list yet.
First one I've found:
Known Trader talent:
Discounts price for trading Permit by a minimum of 10% or up to your Negotiate Skill. Contact spends Charsma % less influence

Should be Charisma

[fallen]

Feb 2, 2017 14:27:49 GMT -5 Alex Fury said:

I don't recall seeing a list yet.
First one I've found:
Known Trader talent:
Discounts price for trading Permit by a minimum of 10% or up to your Negotiate Skill. Contact spends Charsma % less influence

Should be Charisma

THanks will fix! moved the thread into the typos thread.

[fallen]

We are desperately behind on typo clean up now These won't all be fixed for 1.0.17, but we'll get them soon!

[johndramey]

No worries. As long as I'm not irritating the hell out of you and Cory, I'll keep posting stuff I find here. Let me know if you want me to stop, though

[fallen]

Thanks, all fixed for 1.0.19. Please see new typo thread. Locking this one!