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Post by grävling on Feb 28, 2017 2:31:17 GMT -5
Politician and Prince (in the pick contacts screen)
s/EdictsContact/Edicts, Contact/
Military Commander and Starport Mechanic
s/RecruitsContact/Recruits, Contact/
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Post by grävling on Feb 28, 2017 8:54:23 GMT -5
At the exchange. They don't want my Pesticides or Fertiliser; it's illegal.
s/to trade this resources/to trade these resources/ (or this resource) -- or simply 'these goods'
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Post by grävling on Mar 1, 2017 8:32:15 GMT -5
Selling into a Trade Ban exchange warning
s/galatic Trade/galactic Trade/
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Post by tenbsmith on Mar 1, 2017 13:20:55 GMT -5
On the Offered Missions, More Missions Screen
s/To discussion a Mission, ask about one of my goals/ To discuss a.../
On the Offered Missions, More Missions Screen, on the goal buttons
-Each button has the phrase "Ask about my goals, maybe something _____"
-Remove the "Ask about my goals" from the button as it is redundant with the text immediately above the buttons.
On the Offered Missions, More Missions Screen, on the goal buttons
s/ maybe about a friend or enemy/ maybe about an ally or enemy/ friend seems like something personal, so seems to overlap with the personal goal.
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Post by grävling on Mar 1, 2017 13:34:13 GMT -5
On the Offered Missions, More Missions Screen s/To discussion a Mission, ask about one of my goals/ To discuss a.../ On the Offered Missions, More Missions Screen, on the goal buttons -Each button has the phrase "Ask about my goals, maybe something _____" -Remove the "Ask about my goals" from the button as it is redundant with the text immediately above the buttons. On the Offered Missions, More Missions Screen, on the goal buttons s/ maybe about a friend or enemy/ maybe about an ally or enemy/ friend seems like something personal, so seems to overlap with the personal goal. political ally? perhaps |
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Post by tenbsmith on Mar 1, 2017 13:44:24 GMT -5
The middle button is political, so not that.
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Post by fallen on Mar 1, 2017 14:07:10 GMT -5
On the Offered Missions, More Missions Screen s/To discussion a Mission, ask about one of my goals/ To discuss a.../ On the Offered Missions, More Missions Screen, on the goal buttons -Each button has the phrase "Ask about my goals, maybe something _____" -Remove the "Ask about my goals" from the button as it is redundant with the text immediately above the buttons. On the Offered Missions, More Missions Screen, on the goal buttons s/ maybe about a friend or enemy/ maybe about an ally or enemy/ friend seems like something personal, so seems to overlap with the personal goal. This is replaced with actual buttons about real goals and not demo text for the next update. |
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Post by athios on Mar 2, 2017 16:10:36 GMT -5
On crew member profiles, there is already text description of "[Name] has X Trait(s) currently unknown. A (wo)man of mystery." This seems a bit redundant with the Mysterious trait. Perhaps rename it to Reticent?
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Post by grävling on Mar 3, 2017 4:17:51 GMT -5
Pardoning
s/well placed/well-placed/
s/from poor reputation/from a poor reputation/
s/Pay a Pardon for <howmuch> with <what faction> for <howmuch> Rep/Pay <howmuch> for a Pardon with <what faction> that will restore <howmuch> Rep/
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Post by grävling on Mar 3, 2017 15:26:47 GMT -5
Description of Refined Spice in the Exchange. (and I remember fixing this, so looks like what is in the game is slightly older than my last fixes)
s/signifigant/significant/
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Post by bobc on Mar 3, 2017 17:50:05 GMT -5
Smuggler Talent - Word in the Hall
s/ talking the Hall/talking in the Hall/
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Post by grävling on Mar 4, 2017 2:05:57 GMT -5
Try to help with the Negotiations. Botch things.
s/The outcomes/The outcome/
You have 2 variables swapped or something. The text reads:
The shifting political terrain turned the tables against 1 week, 3 days and our efforts even after Negotiator Verlan of effort
That 2 'effort's in there as well, so "turned the tables against us. We wasted <so much time> in futile effort" or some such would be better.
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Post by bobc on Mar 4, 2017 18:34:39 GMT -5
Pilot Talent - Sure Landfall and Hyperwarp Navigator Talent - Orderly Drop
s/halfing operation time/halving operation time/
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Post by grävling on Mar 8, 2017 15:09:02 GMT -5
Word in The Hall (Smuggler talent)
s/from the talking the/from the talking in the/
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Post by bobc on Mar 9, 2017 15:35:21 GMT -5
Register Trade Permit (level 4 text) - final paragraph
s/accept from a a Star Trader/accept from a Star Trader/
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