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Post by fallen on Mar 21, 2017 10:35:16 GMT -5
Thx, fixed!
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Post by grävling on Mar 21, 2017 12:50:51 GMT -5
 s/safe haven/a safe haven/ s/.././ s/of/for not only/ s/through/throughout/ |
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Post by grävling on Mar 21, 2017 12:54:24 GMT -5
 It would be good if this description mentioned that it was only good at certain ranges, making it a bit less useful than you might think. s/if hit/if successful/ |
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Post by grävling on Mar 21, 2017 12:58:10 GMT -5
 Sometimes the morale doesn't format properly here. Always the third member of the team. |
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Post by grävling on Mar 21, 2017 13:06:31 GMT -5
 That sentence just clunks. "Crew that normally equip weapons from the weapons locker will automatically begin using ones from the replacement version" Of course, the important message to get out there is for when you remove your weapons locker altogether. Not sure what we can do about that. |
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Post by grävling on Mar 21, 2017 13:16:14 GMT -5
 s/prevent identification and prevented reputation/prevented identification and reputation/ Also, this came up as part of patrolling, and I then moved to a screen that said I did lose reputation with SS for all that. |
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Post by grävling on Mar 21, 2017 13:52:55 GMT -5
 s/to/of/ or do you mean 'up to 36% of' ? be nice if we could get told which component ... |
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Post by grävling on Mar 21, 2017 13:57:01 GMT -5
 s/in this system's atmo.// 1. There might not even be an atmosphere. 2. 'Atmo' isn't used anywhere else, as far as I have seen. 3. Don't you patrol above the atmosphere, anyway? |
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Post by grävling on Mar 21, 2017 13:59:37 GMT -5
 s/have/has/ But lots of time has passed, of course, we were drawing cards like crazy. Maybe if you were going to print that message here, you should just supress it? |
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Post by fallen on Mar 21, 2017 19:02:21 GMT -5
It would be good if this description mentioned that it was only good at certain ranges, making it a bit less useful than you might think. Iconography - all ship talents have dots beneath them indicating valid ranges. 3 dots under Raking Fire indicate "can be used at range 3, 2, or 1" |
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Post by fallen on Mar 21, 2017 19:05:48 GMT -5
Of course, the important message to get out there is for when you remove your weapons locker altogether. Not sure what we can do about that. All three cases are covered: - Replacing locker with locker - Replacing locker with something else, but you have another weapon locker on board - Replacing locker with something else, no weapon lockers around (revert to basic) Improved all 3 on your advice. Thx. |
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Post by fallen on Mar 21, 2017 19:10:49 GMT -5
s/have/has/ But lots of time has passed, of course, we were drawing cards like crazy. Maybe if you were going to print that message here, you should just supress it? Not sure how you got that result. There is already code to suppress time in Explore/Spy/Blockade/Patrol. I just tested it and don't get it. I wonder what else I am missing. EDIT: nevermind, found the logic branch you must have been down on that mission type. |
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Post by fallen on Mar 21, 2017 19:13:25 GMT -5
All fixed, thanks!
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Post by grävling on Mar 22, 2017 0:40:42 GMT -5
 s/in Wilderness/in the Wilderness/ and 2.1 reads better as 'Publicly deliver the prisoner to justice'.  missing prisoner name -- a Prisoner in Chains?  That sentence is pretty much inside-out "We need a diplomatic audience within the Palace in order to publicly deliver the prisoner to justice." reads better, but I am not sure about the 'Palace' part. I think my ex-BH contact is living in internal exile on a near-wilderness indie settlement. I am not sure there are any palaces on the whole planet. Strike that bit and just say 'we need a diplomatic audience to publicly ...' ? |
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Post by grävling on Mar 22, 2017 0:52:43 GMT -5
 I don't understand this description at all. |
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