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Post by grävling on Mar 22, 2017 1:18:48 GMT -5
Some contacts aren't advertising the services they provide, and others are advertising services they no longer provide, and some are advertising one service while providing another. I have a smuggler contact who says he offers 'special gear'. He has none. But he does have a Black Market connection, which is not mentioned. I have a prison warden contact who also says he offers 'special gear'. He has none. But he was willing to pardon me for minor crimes against his faction, and pardoning is not mentioned. I have screenshots for all the above, if needed. I have a Fixer contact who has a Black Market connection, which isn't mentioned. He also offers special gear, see below.  This special gear description makes it sound like he is selling weapons but he is selling combat enhancing implants, instead. s/With his/Within his/ s/buy or sell/buy and sell/ (or s/both/either/ but I like the 'and' version better) |
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Post by grävling on Mar 22, 2017 1:29:04 GMT -5
 s/Prince in/a Prince/ s/among/with/ I cannot tell if 10 is the influence he has, now, and it is not enough, or whether what he has is not enough, and he needs 10 influence, an indication that the sentence needs work. 'to have enough pull' is a nice turn of phrase to use when you are sick of mentioning the word 'influence', but in this sentence, you already have to mention it, so there is no need. I would just drop the phrase and save it for some other time. |
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Post by fallen on Mar 22, 2017 11:12:36 GMT -5
Improved Port Maintenance description. As started, whenever you land at a planet, the Talent will repair Dmg to components on the ship equal to the Starport Rating up to your Repair Skill.
Simplified this to be 10% to Repair Skill for next update.
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Post by fallen on Mar 22, 2017 11:16:40 GMT -5
Thx, fixed!
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Post by grävling on Mar 22, 2017 11:28:37 GMT -5
Improved Port Maintenance description. As started, whenever you land at a planet, the Talent will repair Dmg to components on the ship equal to the Starport Rating up to your Repair Skill. Simplified this to be 10% to Repair Skill for next update. I still don't understand. Why is there a lower bound here at all? 10% of what? |
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Post by fallen on Mar 22, 2017 11:30:16 GMT -5
Improved Port Maintenance description. As started, whenever you land at a planet, the Talent will repair Dmg to components on the ship equal to the Starport Rating up to your Repair Skill. Simplified this to be 10% to Repair Skill for next update. s/10% to/10% of/ No, that isn't right. Ship Component Damage is expressed in %. Like, the component has taken 60% Dmg. So, the Engineer will fix 10% up to Repair Skill in Dmg. If you ahve 22 Repair Skill, 22% fixed. |
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Post by grävling on Mar 22, 2017 11:34:25 GMT -5
Ok, so it will repair your Repair skill in Dmg, or 10% -- whichever is larger?
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Post by fallen on Mar 22, 2017 12:05:08 GMT -5
Yep, "10% up to Repair Skill" -- common parlance used across the entire Talent set
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Post by grävling on Mar 22, 2017 12:19:51 GMT -5
Not that I have noticed. It's 10% + <your some other skill> that I am used to seeing.
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Post by grävling on Mar 22, 2017 12:28:08 GMT -5
 s/grant/grants/ s/tough careful/both tough and careful,/ |
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Post by fallen on Mar 22, 2017 12:43:12 GMT -5
Thx fixed.
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Post by grävling on Mar 22, 2017 16:38:47 GMT -5
The Starport Mechanic claims to have special gear, but does not.
So does the Military Commander.
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Post by athios on Mar 22, 2017 17:55:34 GMT -5
Navigator Talent description - Talk of Far Worlds
When passing the Spice plate in the Hall, talk of distance distant worlds gains an introduction to a new Contact
(side note: can someone please unsticky all the typo threads for previous builds? <-- thanks!!)
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Post by athios on Mar 23, 2017 0:56:28 GMT -5
Diplomat Talent — Upstaged Success Description says "Increase Contact Reputation bonuses on completing a Mission by Charisma %" But when fired, the Log Entry says "Upstaged Success Talent increased our Reputation gain by 2."  If the Talent description is correct, then this Log Entry should be changed to "Upstaged Success Talent increased our Reputation gain with [Contact name] by [amount]." |
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Post by athios on Mar 23, 2017 1:20:42 GMT -5
 I love that this Talent exists.  The name does not sound appropriate though. Unfortunately, I don't have many (good) ideas for a replacement... Cult Following? Local Fan? Boys will be Boys? (Turning a) Blind Eye? Aura of Impunity? ( grävling ! Need your help here!) |
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