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Post by grävling on Jan 19, 2012 22:21:47 GMT -5
Finnian Ring Car Bombs
I think they should be the 'Car Bombers' myself.
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fela
Curator
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Post by fela on Jan 20, 2012 7:21:41 GMT -5
Random encounter:
"The spy attack THIEVES you." - I'm not really sure what you're trying to say..SIEVES ?
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Post by grävling on Jan 20, 2012 7:30:16 GMT -5
Given that what it does is greatly adds to your heat -- SEARS you, maybe?
Hmm, no, that the 'spy attack' which BURNS you. It's the NANO attack which 'THIEVES', but I don't know if it does anything now. It may be a 'planned for the future'. Something that STEALS from you would be very annoying. I have wondered if the plan is to make something that rots your posssions. Get hit with this too often and you have to replace your armour or your guns ....
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Post by grävling on Jan 20, 2012 20:27:00 GMT -5
Alchemical Devices Incorporated
s/state of the art/state-of-the-art/
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Post by grävling on Jan 21, 2012 1:19:28 GMT -5
Ricco (the Blue Ox) conversation
s/Bring Ricco out there/Bring Ricco out here/
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Post by grävling on Jan 21, 2012 1:35:17 GMT -5
Blue Ox Pak -> Blue Ox Pack
in a popup
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Post by fallen on Jan 21, 2012 9:33:52 GMT -5
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Post by grävling on Jan 21, 2012 19:20:58 GMT -5
FN-PAR 85 factsheet
s/weaponary/weaponry/
s/out-classes/outclasses/
And the sentence 'With both amazing range and power ....' is followed by a near duplicate sentence all about 'outclasses all other weaponry'. Combine them.into 1 sentence, or make it more clear that the 1st sentence is about the entire FN-PAR range, and then make a second sentence about why the FN-PAR 85 is superior to other FN-PARs.
The description of the FN-PAR 85 in my inventory says Y5000 but I was only charged Y3000 for it by the woman in her conversations.
The FN-PAR 65 available from Exxxxon costs Y5000
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Post by grävling on Jan 22, 2012 7:40:13 GMT -5
Cognac Brawn conversation (where you get his V-chip)
There is a screen that ends New Boston, and should be New Boston. (missing period)
The text would work better if instead of:
Give my frend a call. Now that you have established ... work for you. He's known as Cognac Brawn, take his V-Chip.
it was
Now that you have established .... work for you. GIve my friend a call. He's known as Cognac Brawn, take his V-Chip.
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And his name is mispelled Cognac Brown in the V-chip you receive.
i.e. swap the first 2 sentences.
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Post by grävling on Jan 22, 2012 10:06:46 GMT -5
Loot on some Los V corpses 'Fenian Street Files' (or maybe Finian Street files), but at any rate, 1 'n'. >That was the toast. In your inventory they are 'Finian Street Files'.
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Post by grävling on Jan 23, 2012 23:58:33 GMT -5
Jumped by 'Los Valentines Gangers' according to the toast.
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Post by fallen on Jan 24, 2012 6:08:27 GMT -5
grävling - all resolved for the next update.
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Post by grävling on Jan 24, 2012 7:44:43 GMT -5
Collen Doguan[sic] Data Hount[sic]
In Fennian VIP room. Should be Colleen Dougan Data Hound, no?
s/The Knight Horizon are/The Knight Horizon is/
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Post by grävling on Jan 24, 2012 7:46:21 GMT -5
Winston (in Fennian VIP rooms)
s/You'd be surprise/You'd be surprised at/ (2 fixes)
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Post by fallen on Jan 24, 2012 8:20:41 GMT -5
grävling - the duel is on =) I am not going to let your bug reports get ahead of me! Thanks, as always! Both fixed.
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