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Post by grävling on Jan 25, 2012 0:52:59 GMT -5
Colleen Doguan[sic] Data Hunt [sic]
hasn't been fixed yet.
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Post by grävling on Jan 26, 2012 1:01:45 GMT -5
Emry
s/coordination and order in their/coordination and order in this/
s/Yeah, it does./Yeah, it shows./
s/the Knight Horizon at your/Knight Horizon at your/
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Post by grävling on Jan 26, 2012 7:30:33 GMT -5
Shingiin
s/servring/serving/
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Post by grävling on Jan 26, 2012 22:44:29 GMT -5
StealthTekk Vest
change the description to
Though constructed of nanoceramic materials, this type of body armour still remains light and semi-flexiable, which ....
s/won't hinder/doesn't hinder/
s/from running/when running/
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Post by grävling on Jan 27, 2012 8:16:48 GMT -5
Back Bay Street Clinic
s/not you or any/not you nor any/
I'd change the first to be
s/not your hiding spot or your crash pad/neither your hiding spot nor your crash pad/
but maybe that is just me.
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Post by fallen on Jan 28, 2012 12:19:24 GMT -5
All resolved for upcoming update!
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Post by grävling on Jan 29, 2012 0:39:59 GMT -5
Mama Riki's Massage Parlor
I wasn't satisfied with the fix I made to this before, but it was only today that I came up with something I liked better.
s/What can I -- and my boys and girls -- do for you?/What can Mama Riki and her boys and girls do for you?/
Somehow referring to herself in the third person works here.
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Post by grävling on Jan 29, 2012 9:40:46 GMT -5
Motel 10
s/This is Motel 10/This is Motel 10,/
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