Post by grävling on Feb 5, 2012 7:52:27 GMT -5
The sentence
'So a good fixer only provides his Connectors with the real deal -- cyberknights with v-chip ready computers.' doesn't make sense. The Fixer *is* a Connector. Did you mean to say that Fixers provide CyberKnights with V-chips'? Or that some fixers have given some other connectors V-chips (ie Malloy)? or something else altogether?
CyberKnight should be capitalised like this all the time.
s/The one we know of/The only one we know of/ ??
The Yakuza are known to have several very effective fixers who provide knights for many Connectors.
The Fixer provides jobs to Knights, not Knights to other contacts.
Maybe the game has evolved differently than you imagined when you wrote this file?
'So a good fixer only provides his Connectors with the real deal -- cyberknights with v-chip ready computers.' doesn't make sense. The Fixer *is* a Connector. Did you mean to say that Fixers provide CyberKnights with V-chips'? Or that some fixers have given some other connectors V-chips (ie Malloy)? or something else altogether?
CyberKnight should be capitalised like this all the time.
s/The one we know of/The only one we know of/ ??
The Yakuza are known to have several very effective fixers who provide knights for many Connectors.
The Fixer provides jobs to Knights, not Knights to other contacts.Maybe the game has evolved differently than you imagined when you wrote this file?
