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Post by grävling on Feb 20, 2012 2:45:25 GMT -5
MT Taser Unit
s/Light and delivery/Lightweight, yet capable of delivering/
s/to subdue/wishing to subdue/
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Post by grävling on Feb 21, 2012 8:42:06 GMT -5
Good Samaritan Hospital
s/full service/full-service/
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Post by absimiliard on Feb 23, 2012 11:15:57 GMT -5
In the street-extortion encounter, you get a choice to Escape, Kill Them, or try to bribe them. If you are successful in negotiating the bribe you spend no money and go on your way, if you fail you spend 100 n-Y and go your way.
The typo is in the dialog the ganger says to you after the failed check. I didn't think to write it down, but it is something like "Dor 100 nu-Yen you can move along".
Obviously s/Dor/For, and the grammar and wording is a little choppy as well.
Sorry this report is not as concise as Gravling's style.
-abs
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Post by fallen on Feb 24, 2012 21:05:13 GMT -5
absimiliard and grävling - all wrapped up for the next release. Thanks for the quality checks on the Encounters. The next release will also increase the amount of credits gifted by the random thankful citizens to something that will show up on your credit gauge.
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Post by grävling on Feb 24, 2012 22:02:51 GMT -5
Notebook section of your PDA
s/dangerous feeling/dangerous-feeling/
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Post by fallen on Feb 24, 2012 23:08:40 GMT -5
Fixed! Rewrote the text to be cooler too.
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Post by grävling on Feb 25, 2012 0:29:54 GMT -5
Fixed! Rewrote the text to be cooler too. 
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Post by grävling on Feb 25, 2012 18:59:50 GMT -5
In your inventory, the V-chip says 'The Gentlemen[sic] King'.
s/Gentlemen/Gentleman/
Hmm, when you go to phone him, he is called the 'Gentlemen King' here, too.
But, while I think that people have the right to call themselves whatever alias they want,
'Gentleman' would be better in both places.
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Post by fallen on Feb 26, 2012 10:20:02 GMT -5
grävling - he could be the king of all gentlemen, could'nt he? Fixed to Gentleman
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Post by grävling on Feb 26, 2012 10:31:22 GMT -5
grävling - he could be the king of all gentlemen, could'nt he? Fixed to Gentleman Then he would be 'The Gentlemen's King'. |
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Post by fallen on Feb 26, 2012 10:39:50 GMT -5
I will never win =P
I should just own up to that and stop trying.
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Post by grävling on Feb 26, 2012 11:22:30 GMT -5
Thank you for making the change.
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Post by grävling on Feb 27, 2012 13:20:27 GMT -5
Tattoo Parlor
s/well known/well-known/
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Post by cybergenesis on Feb 27, 2012 18:06:10 GMT -5
Hacking error gives spelling for Error as "Errpr"
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Post by grävling on Feb 27, 2012 18:36:13 GMT -5
Citizen Niam, Maintenance Worker
s/work that you do/work than you do/
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