Post by MTKnife on Aug 15, 2021 12:17:06 GMT -5
The last sentence of the description of the Sabateur Talent Raiders Away isn't a complete sentence:
"When attempting boarding causes -2 Reactor Pts, -10 Range Change for the next 3 Turns"
Either the "When" needs to go, or the "causes" needs to be a "cause".
Also, I can't remember precisely where, but in one of the Calagan Faen dialogues (if I recall correctly, it's one of the ones after you've returned the Arbiter from her mission), the weird "now" appears both at the beginning and near the end of one sentence, redundantly.
"When attempting boarding causes -2 Reactor Pts, -10 Range Change for the next 3 Turns"
Either the "When" needs to go, or the "causes" needs to be a "cause".
Also, I can't remember precisely where, but in one of the Calagan Faen dialogues (if I recall correctly, it's one of the ones after you've returned the Arbiter from her mission), the weird "now" appears both at the beginning and near the end of one sentence, redundantly.
