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Post by grävling on May 27, 2012 2:58:25 GMT -5
Raptor III
s/hand held/ hand-held/
s/high velocity/high-velocity/
s/weaponary/weaponry/
s/highest tech handgun/most technologically sophisticated handgun/
s/produce/produced/
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Post by Cory Trese on May 27, 2012 12:38:01 GMT -5
Designed as a sidearm for mercenaries and professional soldiers, the H3 Retaliation features integral recoil and targetting systems. Small package, big punch!
The Raptor III is the ultimate in hand-held high-velocity weaponry. No other pistol on the market today provides the unparalleled stopping power of the Raptor series and the Raptor III is the most technologically sophisticated handgun produced by Mars Inc for public sale.
Built for extended service and high rates of fire the AK-MiG IV is marketed to professional mercenaries and corporate armies. Designed as an upgrade to the venerable AK-MiG III the MiG IV is an advanced combat SMG with balanced accuracy, range and lethality.
Constructed from cutting-edge composites and synthetic materials the HPX 59 is arguably one of the most advanced assault rifles on the market today. Designed to provide overwhelming power, rate of fire and range this gun has it all!
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Post by grävling on May 27, 2012 14:24:38 GMT -5
Designed as a sidearm for mercenaries and professional soldiers, the H3 Retaliation features integral recoil and targetting systems. Small package, big punch! The Raptor III is the ultimate in hand-held high-velocity weaponry. No other pistol on the market today provides the unparalleled stopping power of the Raptor series and the Raptor III is the most technologically sophisticated handgun produced by Mars Inc for public sale. Built for extended service and high rates of fire the AK-MiG IV is marketed to professional mercenaries and corporate armies. Designed as an upgrade to the venerable AK-MiG III the MiG IV is an advanced combat SMG with balanced accuracy, range and lethality. Constructed from cutting-edge composites and synthetic materials the HPX 59 is arguably one of the most advanced assault rifles on the market today. Designed to provide overwhelming power, rate of fire and range this gun has it all! These look good but I would s/rate of fire/rate-of-fire/ -- the other way is not wrong, though. Generally you say 'arguably the most advanced' rather than 'arguably one of the most advanced' -- because if there is an argument over whether it is even one of the most advanced, then maybe it's not very good. I haven't been able to find the last 2 in stores so far. Maybe they are only sold in back rooms? But I spent a lot of time in the Mars VIP lounge today and didn'ẗ find any. |
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Post by Cory Trese on May 27, 2012 14:41:43 GMT -5
I did a bunch of shop re-organization today to make them more available and better organized by manufacturing corporation.
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Post by grävling on May 28, 2012 0:12:48 GMT -5
New Screen
s/Select Profression/Select Profession/
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Post by grävling on May 29, 2012 4:35:27 GMT -5
Ares Gamma Mk 3
s/ is the number on/is the number one/
s/best selling/best-selling/
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Post by grävling on May 29, 2012 7:08:11 GMT -5
H3 Retaliation
s/intregal/integral/
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Post by grävling on May 29, 2012 7:35:36 GMT -5
Defensor MT
s/dissappointed/disappointed/
s/it's faithful fans/its faithful fans/
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Post by grävling on May 29, 2012 8:23:13 GMT -5
HPX 59
s/rate of fire/ rate-of-fire/
s/and range/ and range -- /
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Post by grävling on May 30, 2012 8:44:33 GMT -5
Frontline Disaster Aversion Kit
s/wid evariety/wide variety/
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Post by grävling on Jun 3, 2012 0:51:52 GMT -5
Faction detailed briefing (you get from Politics Screen)
Mars Corp Notable Products
Mars Corp BattleTac Master
14,465 Nuyen, rating 2, Storage 80MP, Jobs 3
It actually costs Y8465
Also what is with the '^' in Gun Link ^2 ? ?
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Post by fallen on Jun 3, 2012 10:16:11 GMT -5
All resolved for the next release! grävling - thanks as always! |
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