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Post by grävling on Jun 4, 2012 6:50:37 GMT -5
Ultra-Fax
s/The Knight Horizon are a new player/The Knight Horizon is a new player/
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Post by grävling on Jun 4, 2012 7:28:44 GMT -5
Suka Taka
s/whose got eyes/who's got eyes/
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Post by grävling on Jun 6, 2012 0:07:28 GMT -5
Mars Scope-Tek Panther Cannon
s/State of the art/State-of-the-art/
s/built in/built-in/
s/long-site/long-sight/
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Post by grävling on Jun 7, 2012 3:28:17 GMT -5
'I need to purchase an cybernetic implant.'
s/an/a/
(And how did we miss this one for so very, very long?)
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Post by fallen on Jun 7, 2012 10:32:55 GMT -5
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Post by grävling on Jun 7, 2012 16:33:11 GMT -5
Dr. Cure All
1. His phone chip just says Cure All, but when you load it into your computer it says Dr. Cure All. Change the chip?
s/has the most advance/has the most advanced/
s/around this world./around./ or /that exist in this world./ (What you have written sounds like the important thing is that AzTek's factories are distributed around the globe, which isn't what I think you meant. If you did mean it this way, then, well, nevermind.)
s/you can't get/that you just can't get/
s/top-knotch/top-notch/
s/Remember that/Remember, that/
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nemesis
Exemplar
Got Booze? No problemo.
Posts: 374
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Post by nemesis on Jun 9, 2012 2:36:51 GMT -5
All blasters have the description of "non-leathal". It should be changed to non-lethal  |
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Post by grävling on Jun 9, 2012 4:38:00 GMT -5
Victor conversations
s/whet your whistle/wet your whistle/
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Post by grävling on Jun 9, 2012 12:22:25 GMT -5
medkits
s/sucessfully/successfully/
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Post by grävling on Jul 2, 2012 17:48:54 GMT -5
Malpractice
s/there Global Matrix/their Global Matrix/
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Post by fallen on Jul 3, 2012 10:15:33 GMT -5
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