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Post by grävling on Jan 17, 2013 7:49:13 GMT -5
Luka s/So, you will set up home-base in the Fennian/So, we want you to get started in the Fennian/ (or something. It is not that this is grammatically incorrect, it is just that you have said 'set up home base' 3 times in the last 2 sentences, and that is boring.)
Knight to himself s/high paying/high-paying/ s/she doesn't want a citizen/she doesn't want me as a citizen/ s/stay on to make it to the NBZ/appear compliant if I want to make it out to the NBZ/
Luka is being _super_ repetitive about 'start with the Fennians'. I think she mentions this 5 times. You could trim some of this.
s/at the Dockside Hotel/near the Dockside Hotel/
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Post by grävling on Jan 17, 2013 13:38:20 GMT -5
first conversation in NBZ with Mallor s/sees a Knight/sees 'a Knight' / you want quote marks and italics here. trust me. s/delusions/illusions/
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Post by grävling on Jan 18, 2013 11:27:47 GMT -5
Frederic says 'I'd like you to reach rep 25 so I can trust you with some Negotiation jobs' but, of course, now it is escort jobs he wants to trust us with.
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Post by grävling on Jan 18, 2013 11:34:47 GMT -5
Frederic s/been netting/been getting/
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Post by jclarksprint on Jan 18, 2013 17:02:52 GMT -5
This spelling item is weird, as the the convo has more than one of the statement stored.
Mr. crack-eye, was in VIP room but dont remember wat building name. s/You collection rent on these streets/collecting
Weird part is this only happened on first conversation, subsequent ones on the same contact has the appropriate statement.
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Post by grävling on Jan 19, 2013 1:02:39 GMT -5
Rumours s/are majors savings/are major savings/
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Post by fallen on Jan 19, 2013 14:11:31 GMT -5
100% resolved! Thanks again for all your hard work!
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