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Post by Guest on Sept 11, 2013 15:53:54 GMT -5
I love your stories. There is so much depth, though that leads to so many things I don't understand well enough. I'm not too familiar with Cyber Knights, but some questions I have include the role and reach of the major corporations, especially AzTek (maybe you did explain it and it's all fuzzy in my head), and what happens with Mordacai (maybe not so important).
As for your killing suggestions...
I like Travis, I don't think really he deserves to die or even to have Veronica die, but hey, this story is cruel! And why'd you have to abruptly kill off Larking, I wanted to see him and Veronica at least heading to some sort of conclusion one way or another jajaja
The only one I don't care much for is Diana, she didn't stick in my mind so much. Everyone else, I'm ambivalent about. If there is any good reason storywise to kill anyone, then by all means go ahead. Except Cerberus, lately isn't he kind of extremely important, and seemingly invulnerable?
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Post by Jacob on Sept 11, 2013 16:00:44 GMT -5
Please spread your legs, and put your hands in the yellow circles. .... What? I'm Max Mercer, more Metal than Man |
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Post by rabidbite on Sept 11, 2013 16:33:39 GMT -5
I love your stories. There is so much depth, though that leads to so many things I don't understand well enough. I'm not too familiar with Cyber Knights, but some questions I have include the role and reach of the major corporations, especially AzTek (maybe you did explain it and it's all fuzzy in my head), and what happens with Mordacai (maybe not so important). As for your killing suggestions... I like Travis, I don't think really he deserves to die or even to have Veronica die, but hey, this story is cruel! And why'd you have to abruptly kill off Larking, I wanted to see him and Veronica at least heading to some sort of conclusion one way or another jajaja The only one I don't care much for is Diana, she didn't stick in my mind so much. Everyone else, I'm ambivalent about. If there is any good reason storywise to kill anyone, then by all means go ahead. Except Cerberus, lately isn't he kind of extremely important, and seemingly invulnerable? Welcome guest  Thank you for your kind words. I must admit I did Diana a disservice in this part of Cerberus. As for Cerberus being important, oh yes. He is. But he's not a fixed pillar. The story won't crumble with him gone, it just gets a big plot twist. As for him being invulnerable, hell no. I can think of ... hmm... 6 ways to kill him, off the top of my head. Some harder than others, some simpler. Thank you for the input and your participation |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 11, 2013 18:52:12 GMT -5
Please spread your legs, and put your hands in the yellow circles. .... What? I'm Max Mercer, more Metal than Man  don't tell me you've never seen The Fifth Element |
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Post by rabidbite on Sept 12, 2013 9:13:51 GMT -5
Frankly I didn't think about the 5th Element either. I thought TSA at the airport.
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Post by Jacob on Sept 12, 2013 14:06:36 GMT -5
Watched it some years ago, so I can't really remember every quote... lol.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 4, 2013 14:29:58 GMT -5
I get stuck in a verbal rut too. Always keep a thesaurus handy.
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Post by Jamozk Ekhiss on Oct 5, 2013 8:44:10 GMT -5
"No listening or controlling devices" - very careful with your words, Cerberus. You told Akira you hadn't done anything serious, and he cut bullets by reflex.
Cerberus has become one of my favourite episodic series of any medium (seeing a new post in Cerberus gives the same thoughts as watching the next Agents of SHIELD).
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Post by Deleted on Oct 5, 2013 11:25:01 GMT -5
Those two have quite a repoire. Like a post apocalyptic Laurel & Hardy.
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Post by rabidbite on Oct 5, 2013 19:19:20 GMT -5
"No listening or controlling devices" - very careful with your words, Cerberus. You told Akira you hadn't done anything serious, and he cut bullets by reflex. Cerberus has become one of my favourite episodic series of any medium (seeing a new post in Cerberus gives the same thoughts as watching the next Agents of SHIELD). Those words aren't as dangerous as other words in there. rabid |
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Post by Jamozk Ekhiss on Oct 6, 2013 7:39:04 GMT -5
On my fourth study of the post, I see that he never said he'd take the current chip out, but my first thought is that it can't be that obvious. I'll keep thinking on this...
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Post by Jamozk Ekhiss on Oct 7, 2013 9:52:24 GMT -5
 I did not see that coming. I can kind of see Cerberus' twisted logic in it (I think that makes something wrong with me), but that's one of the greatest bombshells ever written. |
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Post by rabidbite on Oct 7, 2013 10:23:48 GMT -5
Good, Good! I always worry I'm being obvious. I hate being completely predictable.
On another note,
I estimate my Cerberus fan base is ... 10 people .. tops. *SIGH* Oh well. I write for artistic enjoyment and development more than anything else.
I posted 1 post every 12 hours or so, so from now on it gets a little slower. Things are going to get more complex.
Now, for all folks, the 3rd part of Cerberus is dealing with the following issues.
1. The Creator and Cerberus' code and chain relationship.
2. Diana's brother. What exactly is so important here?
3. Mordacai, what's his and AzTek Global's stake in all this?
4. The (soon to be revealed ( probably predictable )) secret of Travis and the DNA data.
I hope to end Cerberus before January (don't hold me to it, though.)
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Post by Deleted on Oct 7, 2013 10:39:09 GMT -5
Least you've generated some fanart.
And I thought Larking was dead and... unavailable?
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Post by rabidbite on Oct 7, 2013 11:58:45 GMT -5
Least you've generated some fanart. And I thought Larking was dead and... unavailable? All in good time . |
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Thank you for your kind words.
