Jamozk Ekhiss
Star Hero
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Post by Jamozk Ekhiss on Oct 7, 2013 12:05:10 GMT -5
Sure, he's dead - and isn't coming back anytime soon - but if Cerberus sees a use in creating a new one out of Stryker, there's no reason why he couldn't (we have plastic surgery now - it'd be far more advanced in the NBZ).
Oh, and not having a large fanbase doesn't matter - my first written series now has probably no more than 4 readers, I've written part of a sci-fi space story that's neither finished nor read by anyone, and there's a whole fantasy world on my hard drive I've never even put online that I write purely for my own enjoyment (it currently stands at some isolated scraps of story, some scenes I'll write someday, and 3 pages of notes on various things in the world). And don't worry about giving us a time for posts - schedules always change, and you can never accurately predict when you'll have time to write, or when ideas will come to you.
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Post by rabidbite on Oct 10, 2013 23:23:04 GMT -5
Been re-reading Cerberus and I've found some instances where the dialogue is ... well ... weird and disjointed to the point of insensibility. So fixing that as I go. Will post the edits once that's done.
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Post by rabidbite on Oct 31, 2013 9:13:33 GMT -5
So, why haven't I posted in a while. Well, I've actually completed the next 3 posts for Cerberus ... one is ... very .. VERY tricky and required a lot of attention. I'm merely going over the old story, backtracking to see that I haven't made consistency errors (or too many of those). At the moment, I'm not willing to post until I've completed a few more sections on my word processor and reviewed them, because things get so complicated I want to make sure the concepts of the story don't suspend disbelief too much. I've also been doing a lot of Alpha testing with Heroes of Steel, so forgive me for being distracted with that  rabid |
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Jamozk Ekhiss
Star Hero
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Post by Jamozk Ekhiss on Oct 31, 2013 15:48:45 GMT -5
Don't worry about it - waiting just makes it better when it arrives!
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Post by rabidbite on Nov 1, 2013 7:20:16 GMT -5
There, with my current Alpha Testing Phase generally complete, I worked diligently and was able to post this morning. Cheers.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 1, 2013 20:22:35 GMT -5
Was there a DND agreement? And do you have any ideas how you're going to crossover to the Shalunverse? I always loved that angle, even if the main character is a cross between HAL-9000 and Dexter.  |
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Jamozk Ekhiss
Star Hero
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Post by Jamozk Ekhiss on Nov 3, 2013 9:35:55 GMT -5
I highly doubt AzTek can do anything to Cerberus. There won't be any weaknesses he doesn't know about, and he'd take measures against all of them - how can you beat a guy like him?
Saying that, considering what's happened in the past with this, there's bound to be something I'm not noticing, or don't know, or anything that's going to make what I just said completely invalid.
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Post by rabidbite on Nov 3, 2013 12:48:49 GMT -5
I highly doubt AzTek can do anything to Cerberus. There won't be any weaknesses he doesn't know about, and he'd take measures against all of them - how can you beat a guy like him? I subscribe to what Cerberus always says. Never underestimate human ingenuity. Overconfidence can kill everything and anyone. rabidbite |
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Post by rabidbite on Nov 4, 2013 8:04:32 GMT -5
Was there a DND agreement? And do you have any ideas how you're going to crossover to the Shalunverse? I always loved that angle, even if the main character is a cross between HAL-9000 and Dexter. What's a DND agreement? rabid |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 4, 2013 8:05:45 GMT -5
A nondisclosure agreement.
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Post by rabidbite on Nov 5, 2013 15:37:24 GMT -5
A nondisclosure agreement. Huh. I somehow missed that. |
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Post by rabidbite on Nov 7, 2013 6:32:21 GMT -5
80,000 words.
*Whistles*
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Post by Guest on Nov 8, 2013 12:19:30 GMT -5
Oh the horror... but I cannot take my eyes off and stop reading it!
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Post by rabidbite on Nov 9, 2013 16:36:37 GMT -5
Think the story is in a good spot to sit back and do another read-through and spelling correction/continuity verification check.
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Post by rabidbite on Nov 11, 2013 19:11:01 GMT -5
Well, after do consideration and thought, I decided to remove the Jeena Thurman twist of her being an assassin.
Why?
Because its too much. It's a twist for the mere event of -having- a twist. It ... doesn't fit and I feel I compromise what I want to achieve by including it. I sit down to think about where that particular twist is going and none of the paths are ones that I like. They end up with half-hearted conclusions, silly conclusions, unsatisfying resolutions and downright crappy development.
So, poof, gone, edited out.
Instead I added a few lines that I believe fit the scene a lot better.
Sorry for the hiccup.
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