Data Kill: Comments HERE!

[paxdad]

Aug 11, 2013 7:34:38 GMT -5 Jamozk Ekhiss said:

That was epic. I'm trying to think of a more useful way of phrasing that, but I can't. It was just epic.

Thanks @jamozk Ekhiss I appreciate your comment! I'm glad you are enjoying it so far.
I enjoy reading the feedback.

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[paxdad]

What's playing in Sl1p’s headphones?

Apoptygma Berzerk, Unicorn Alon Cohen Remix.

www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gg44R3dMBUE&feature=youtube_gdata_player

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"The matrix was a strange dichotomy, on the one hand you had the corporations trying to lock it down, and filter the public discourse as much as possible, intent on making it a 24 hour shopping mall and entertainment plex, at least on the public servers. On the other hand you had academics and the many anonymous hacktivists working for a free and open net."

Amazing how fiction can be based on so much truth. Sounds like you don't Need Specific Advice on what is going on these days that fits directly into dystopian fiction. Great description.

[paxdad]

Thanks dayan the seeds of the dystopia are all around us!

[Jamozk Ekhiss]

Indeed - I bought a copy of V for Vendetta yesterday (I've been looking for it for years), that perfectly sums up what the world is becoming.

[paxdad]

Updated Chapter 2 & 4 with some minor readability fixes before posting to the blog!

[paxdad]

In the process of packing and having house showings. In the process of moving. This story will continue in the near future as things settle down and more time comes my way. Thanks to my few readers for their support!