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Post by grävling on Oct 22, 2011 9:19:18 GMT -5
Chants Bar
Cat Chants says "My name is Cats". So one of them must be wrong.
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Post by grävling on Oct 22, 2011 10:08:42 GMT -5
The Hydra Club
s/This is the Hydar/This is the Hydra/
s/Lets/Let's/
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Post by grävling on Oct 22, 2011 10:14:10 GMT -5
Warehouse (the one in Old Bridge) You are greeted by a 'Heavy Armored Guard' -- and he may be heavy, indeed. But I think you meant 'Heavily Armored'.  |
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Post by grävling on Oct 22, 2011 11:40:40 GMT -5
My reputation with the streets is a 'Looser' -- you want 'Loser' here.
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Post by grävling on Oct 22, 2011 15:05:57 GMT -5
Laughing Dog
s/most CyberKnights are not longer fully human/most CyberKnights are no longer fully human/
And 'most have undergone extensive modification known as cyberware', isn't quite correct. 'most have undergone extensive modification, augmenting and replacing parts of their body with cyberware' would be better.
s/CyberKnight are the street mercenaries/CyberKnights are the street mercenaries/
s/who make the Corp work of New Boston work/who do the core of the New Boston Corp work/
s/Jobs need done, sometimes dangerous ones/When jobs need doing, sometimes dangerous ones/
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Post by grävling on Oct 22, 2011 15:29:09 GMT -5
Happy Joy Bar
s/but it is what I've been given that that is enough for me./but it is what I've been given. That is enough for me./
s/judge a chipbook by it's case/judge a chipbook by its case/
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Post by grävling on Oct 22, 2011 15:46:44 GMT -5
Super State Hotel
s/that it blend state of the art guest priviledges/that it blends state-of-the-art guest privileges/
(note three errors: blends, state-of-the-art, and privileges)
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Post by grävling on Oct 23, 2011 0:20:00 GMT -5
Saytek Medical Research Facility
s/here to apply to a corporate medical test/here for your corporate medical test/
s/patient's ward/patients' ward/
s/expirements/experiments/ (in 2 places, the question and the answer)
s/within the 22nd century/of the 22nd century/
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Post by grävling on Oct 23, 2011 1:12:30 GMT -5
Congress Street Taxi Company
s/Where are the taxi's?/Where are the taxis?/ (I know, it looks weird)
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Post by grävling on Oct 23, 2011 1:26:59 GMT -5
s/Ninos Family Dining/Nino's Family Dining/
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Post by grävling on Oct 23, 2011 3:07:03 GMT -5
s/Water andFuel Storage Facility/Water and Fuel Storage Facility/
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Post by grävling on Oct 23, 2011 3:26:46 GMT -5
Conversation with AzTec Sales rep: She never took my picture, since I first wallked into her store with a rep of 20 with AzTech. s/Ive/I've/ s/whet your whistle/wet your whistle/ see: www.takeourword.com/TOW114/page4.htmls/your halfway there/you're halfway there/ (I would spell it "half-way" as well, but I think that is a US/UK difference) s/You wont/You won't/ From the arms brief of the FN-PAR 85 mm I was offered s/desimate/decimate/ s/weaponary/weaponry/ |
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Post by grävling on Oct 23, 2011 3:52:01 GMT -5
Killing Naga Club
s/that I' right/that I'm right/
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Post by grävling on Oct 23, 2011 4:05:27 GMT -5
Tekka House of Guns
s/finest AzTek weaponary/finest AzTek weaponry/
s/corporate seals in tact/corporate seals intact/
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Post by grävling on Oct 23, 2011 4:20:58 GMT -5
AzTek Stunna
s/capable of delivery/capable of delivering/
Jaguar Warrior
s/withstand any elements/withstand all elements/ (or /withstand any element/)
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