Lead, Steel and Chrome - Knight life (Comments)

[bullgod]

I saw some other stories had separate comments threads for people to leave feedback. Makes the story itself unbroken i suppose. So this is (as it says in the title) a place for comments feedback and ideas on the story Lead, Steel and Chrome- Knight life.

I try to make it as close to the actual game as possible so all the jobs, times, pays and other events have actually occurred in that order. I've actually typed some of it as I play the game. Especially when doing the contracts bits. Not received feedback from you guys and girls yet. So all I have to go on is the view number and who likes the posts.

Feel free to leave all your feedback. Be as honest as possible. If you think it's a pile of vokked alpha hund drek then tell me. I won't shoot you (and neither will Bullgod)

Thanks and safe travels in the zone. That is, unless you work against me.

Ciao

[fallen]

The story is here:
startradersrpg.proboards.com/thread/7740/lead-steel-chrome-knight-life

[bullgod]

Thanks fallen must have forgot to link it

[fallen]

np! Just helps for all comment threads to point to the story, because it can be hard to find.

Loving your work! Keep it up!

[bullgod]

Thanks Those three posts have so far got near 100 views, and they cover the first 1hour 14 minutes in game time

[Jamozk Ekhiss]

I like it - it's the kind if thing I originally wanted to do with In the Net before I had loads of ideas that ended up going somewhere else entirely. It's always interesting to hear game events from a Knight's perspective.

[bullgod]

Thanks :-) Not sure if I'll write all the jobs, it depends on what you (the readers) think and if there are any major things you'd like to see.

I'm thinking at some point of getting a female runner (preferably a gunslinger, sniper or AgentEx), might add some spice?

[bullgod]

Hello readers of Lead, Steel and Chrome

I'd like to say thanks for your feedback.

Just one question though for those who have been reading the story ( startradersrpg.proboards.com/thread/7740/lead-steel-chrome-knight-life?page=1#scrollTo=85268 ) and have read the last chapter with the hacker at the end.

Should the hacker be a one off, a minor character who keeps popping up or a larger part of the story?

If you all want her to be a minor or major character, should I kill her off at some point?

I'd like a bit of your input in the story so I'll take on all your opinions on any aspect of the story. Just don't be too disappointed if a suggestion of yours doesn't pop up.

Thanks

[fallen]

I love the reoccuring character concepts. I think it works perfectly for CK, as in the game you keep hiring specialists back on when you need them.

She seems like a good lead into something awesome.

[bullgod]

Thanks fallen She was actually made on the fly as a way to wind it down. But I'll see what I can do. Feel free to message any ideas for names, or "awesome" things she could lead to.

[ncaoa]

This is great. Love seeing a story from a Knight's point of view
I laughed at the back and forth negotiations for some reason.
Smart man Clive.I've had so many knights shot up by those auto pistol wielding bastards.
Hope the you find a way to reuse the hacker.

[Jacob]

Amusing, interesting, fresh... I like it!

On a side note.... Anyone else heard Kass talking with a heavy Jamaican accent? And I mean heavy. Little Jacob's Brother is nuttin' 'gainst dat.
I gotta catch some sleep,... 20 minutes.

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[bullgod]

ncaoa thanks Maybe you enjoy the negotiations because the connector offers x price and Bullgod doesn't bother persuading to get a higher price, he just haggles it up?


Jacob I hadn't until you mentioned it actually.


But thanks guys, I appreciate all feedback and I'll bring the hacker back at some point. Not sure when but the hacker with "a nice rack" will come back

[bullgod]

Hello again chummers

For all those who read my story ( startradersrpg.proboards.com/thread/7740/lead-steel-chrome-knight-life?page=1#scrollTo=85416 ) I'd like to thank you again. I'm going to be posting things in here as the story develops, especially as there isn't much plot yet. If you read the last chapter, I'd like to know if the Irishman and joygirl were a bit too much? I wasn't sure if they'd be okay or how well they'd go down well with you readers, but we all know the NBZ is full of rape, murder, torture, theft, arson and all sorts of other things, so I thought maybe show the NBZ in most (if not all) its gory and foulness.

All feedback here or in messages is greatly appreciated, negative and positive is good

Thanks to y'all again.

Stay safe on the streets and shoot straight chummers

[Jacob]

Hmm... Had to think about the Hacker a bit, but... Yes. Simple as that. Major Char, kill her off at some Point.

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