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Post by grävling on Apr 21, 2017 14:27:47 GMT -5
 s/Raging storm/A raging storm/ expedition doesn't format properly s/impacting/concerning/ s/collides with/encounters/ |
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Post by grävling on Apr 21, 2017 14:35:21 GMT -5
 more 'doesn't format properly' again, I think that 'The local fauna -- huge, teethy, and aquatic --' would work better. and I have no clue how you could have -3% rare reward. 0% strikes me as the lowest you could get. |
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Post by grävling on Apr 21, 2017 14:39:38 GMT -5
 s/Exploration/The exploration/ s/gravely/and gravely/ |
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Post by grävling on Apr 21, 2017 14:47:43 GMT -5
 'Wilderland' is Rhovanion. (See fallen, we will get elves in here after all!  ) you want 'prowling in this wilderness' or 'in these barrens' or 'in these hinterlands'. |
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Post by fallen on Apr 21, 2017 15:00:24 GMT -5
Thanks for the typo fixes.
The entire screen is broken on your device, so its going to look ugly until we fix it.
Wilderlands is a very common description of wilderness imho. Awesome that it's also elvish!
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