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Post by grävling on Apr 21, 2017 22:52:55 GMT -5
Here we have a 'the plural of spy is spies' problem. Fixed by: Retired Explorer Rothman Saunich controls an inactive agent who has been secretly living in the wilderness of Transition. It is time to reactivate the agent and plant him on an enemy Steel Song world. (And wouldn't it be neat if the agent thought he was successfully hiding from Saunich in the wilderness, because he doesn't want any part of any more missions?) s/to be called into action// (The calling into action happened in the wilderness. This is where the action begins....) s/We must help the Spy sneak out of the controlled district/We must travel to whatever_the_place_is or whatever_the_quad_is, and then help the Spy sneak out of the Star Traders' district (or 'the Star Traders' district of a Steel Song world', if you really want to hide the destination for as long as possible) and into the general population/
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Post by fallen on Apr 21, 2017 23:48:11 GMT -5
Thx, fixed!
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