Post by grävling on Apr 21, 2017 23:13:55 GMT -5
The first fix is easy s/is done/be done/
The second is harder. Either 'Whatever is stored in the Data Cube,' should be dropped, as it adds nothing to the text or --
and this is what I think you meant to say --
Retired Explorer K. K. has demanded that everything be done quietly and under the table. It is illegal to possess whatever is stored in the Data cube, and if it is discovered even his own faction authorities would confiscate it.
