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Post by grävling on May 5, 2017 7:56:11 GMT -5
...and the 'entire mountain' probably didn't come down on the crew. If you need to reduce the number of words to save space s/Suddenly, the entire/A/ s/comes rushing down/rushes down/
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Post by Cory Trese on May 5, 2017 17:53:21 GMT -5
Ticket #3618 (new defect) ST2 - Bug - Avalanche text too long
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Post by grävling on May 8, 2017 6:18:15 GMT -5
Cyclone and Salt-Water Predators are also too long. I would fix Cyclone by: s/Raging Storm lifts a towering waterspout/A towering waterspout lifts/ and the Predators by s/take interest in the crew when they start bleeding/take interest in bleeding crew members/
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Post by fallen on May 8, 2017 18:45:23 GMT -5
Seems like a bug in the card formatter still.
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Post by grävling on May 9, 2017 13:11:30 GMT -5
Monsoon has a similar problem. Rather than 'rivers of water' I would say 'a torrent of water'.
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Post by fallen on May 9, 2017 13:39:59 GMT -5
all fixed.
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Post by grävling on May 9, 2017 13:56:14 GMT -5
YAY! Gosh you are quick!
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Post by grävling on May 10, 2017 2:27:29 GMT -5
Radiation Storm, same problem.
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Post by fallen on May 10, 2017 10:02:53 GMT -5
Fixed thx.
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