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Post by Sinocelt on Sept 28, 2017 14:45:59 GMT -5
P. 3
"Throw Away" => "Throw Away"
P. 4
"--" => "—"
P. 5
"spetrals"?
"Maind Hand" => "Main Hand"
"animation - top" => "animation — top"
P. 6
"looked" => "looked at"
"different than" => "differently from"
P. 12
"a big thanks" => "big thanks" or "a big thank you"
"helping" => "for helping"
P. 13
"center - shift" => "center — shift"
"just like it was" => "just as if it were"
"gloves," => "gloves;"
P. 16
"we've moved" => "we moved"
"has recieved" => "received"
"sizes of the arms, legs, torso connections" => "the sizes of the connections for the arms, legs and torso"
P. 17
"Hot Swap" => "Hot-Swap"
"each of your crew" => "each member of your crew"
"a unique face, outfit, accessories, and weaponry" [It doesn't work, because you can't have "a unique ... accessories/weaponry."] => "a unique apperance (face, outfit, accessories, weaponry)"
"build out"?
P. 17a
"Hot Swap" => "Hot-Swap"
"coo" => "cool"
"merchants" => "merchant’s"
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Post by fallen on Sept 28, 2017 15:23:17 GMT -5
Thanks for the typo posts! We're not planning a revision to the artbook at this time. Really busy with the game Stored this off in the notes list in case we get time to come back to it some day. But, I think its really all about the art. My typo'd ramblings is just the side dish to the main course.
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Post by Sinocelt on Sept 30, 2017 8:45:25 GMT -5
Good, because I gave up after that.
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Post by fallen on Sept 30, 2017 10:09:03 GMT -5
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