Fan Fiction: The Curtain's Drop (In Progress)

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docs.google.com/document/d/1VVpgW5Tc8bNcc5DCHmSapggKHT3OrfBDtikVRUCQVP4/edit?usp=sharing

Taking my time since I'm still new to the Star Traders' canon (and Trese Bros games in general), but I'm reading into the lore and soaking in the minutia of STF earnestly. I'll update the doc by each section I finish and time stamp updates here in OP. Starting with...

2/25/18: Finished Part 1 (introduction)

2/28/18: Finished Part 2 (the application)

3/15/18: Finished Part 3 (orientation)

[fallen]

+1 very fun read! Love to see the great effects of having a lore book out resulting in new fiction

[Brutus Aurelius]

Looks pretty good so far! I did notice a couple things tho.

I will say that the date format is off. It's Year.Week.Day, with the current time in the Galaxy being at least 250AE.

The other thing is that Smuggler Princes aren't true nobility, it's more of a title for powerful smugglers that likely lead a cartel of other smugglers

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Ah, balls, I added an extra digit in the year. Well, fixed that part. The dating is informal thus far, I'll keep the formatting in mind for things ahead.

The "smuggler prince" title is what I expected then. The narrative leads with a generalized view of the commoners: Big figure who controls land (if not outright owns) makes a lord in some capacity. That conception will get popped pretty quickly, though.

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Updated.

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Updated!