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Post by drspendlove on Jul 5, 2018 8:08:44 GMT -5
Blunted or improved? Which is it? Consider rephrasing as "Our various successes and failures have each either blunted or improved..." As it is it reads like the sum total either did one or the other but not both.  |
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Post by fallen on Jul 5, 2018 9:36:57 GMT -5
Yeah, there are 8 different things you might have done well or failed at during the story. They are all summed to reduce or improve her Influence. Its possible you did 4 and 4 and end up with no change.
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Post by drspendlove on Jul 5, 2018 10:48:38 GMT -5
Right. I guess it is only a little confusing to me. Nothing is inherently *wrong* there, just slightly confusing to me. I'll leave the rest of this thread for legitimate typos.
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Post by fallen on Jul 5, 2018 11:22:37 GMT -5
Adding the word "either" looks like it might help. Maybe it should be more clearly spelled out exactly what the game is doing? I won't list the 8 points of consideration, nor can I show the final change to the Influence in this dialog. Anyway, good one to look at!
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