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Post by Cory Trese on Mar 2, 2012 17:13:31 GMT -5
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Post by brucethebruce on Mar 2, 2012 23:10:03 GMT -5
/Startraders Second sentence reads: Pick sides in a galactic conflict and play as bounty hunter, merchant, pirate of smuggler -- I believe that's supposed to be orAnd there's more classes than that. I've played Explorer more than any other class. Just saying could at least say "and more!" or something. Just a suggestion. Buy sell and battle with over 50 ship types and land, explore and trade on more than 40 planets. -- You should really have a comma after ship types. It reads like "50 ship types and 50 land types." It should read like "Buy sell and battle with over 50 ship types, [pause] and land, explore and trade on more than 40 planets." -------------------------- Everything else I can see looks good, and I'm stoked to have all that content available from one page. I bookmarked it and for sure will be referencing it alot! Thanks for all you do and for making such an awesome game!  |
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Post by Fenikso on Mar 3, 2012 14:26:20 GMT -5
Warning! Critique and subjective opinions ahead  ! I know I am detail oriented, idealist person who likes things just perfect. But the details are in my opinion giving the first impression. Star Traders RPG• Has "chaotic" feeling • The description may be more detailed about what players may enjoy about the game, what inspired the universe etc. • It does not say if it speaks about Elite or not. But I would say numbers are outdated. There are much more than 50 ships. (the same apply to the Market) • It does not describe what is the difference between free and Elite • Does not list all contact possibilities, Facebook is missing, link to forum is not in the same place as rest of the contacts • Contains outdated screenshots and logo (BTW Market does have some with background off which also does not make best impression either) • Documentation is outdated (sorry, I had to ;D) • What is the difference between Player's Guide and PDF Manual v2.0 (apart from one being according to version more outdated than another)? • List of ships is outdated • Has potential to improve submersion in the universe - why not add some quotes from famous Quadrant persons etc.? If you would like some help with improving both your ST sites, descriptions, screenshots, and documentation, I volunteer. So now you can not say I am just criticizing  . |
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Post by Slide87 on Mar 3, 2012 15:23:37 GMT -5
i'd want to give u only a suggestion... more non-useful content(like fenikso says about quoting) and also some indepth discussion...'cause if i check for forum or blog i find it,but in the site not i dunno,something as player tips,niniguides,some deep description of game features.... surely it could attract more people that visits the site,to try the games |
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Post by blackgauntlet on Mar 4, 2012 2:57:35 GMT -5
It does not say if it speaks about Elite or not. But I would say numbers are outdated. There are much more than 50 ships. (the same apply to the Market) I think Cory meant ship "types" and not ships. Meaning; theres's Spear Class, Frigate Class, Battlecruiser Class... etc. |
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Post by Cory Trese on Mar 4, 2012 12:49:14 GMT -5
great feedback!
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Post by fallen on Mar 8, 2012 9:18:51 GMT -5
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Post by Slide87 on Mar 8, 2012 9:54:59 GMT -5
fallen Just i thought when i wrote my words,some post ago =) Good Job Guys ^^
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Post by fallen on Mar 8, 2012 10:15:39 GMT -5
Slide87 - its is part of our mission statement, "Listen."
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Post by Slide87 on Mar 8, 2012 13:39:57 GMT -5
I know,you always make us feeling IN the game =)
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Post by fallen on Mar 9, 2012 20:50:39 GMT -5
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Post by Slide87 on Mar 12, 2012 21:56:29 GMT -5
Wow wow wow =)
Great Adds!!!(and i've also seen tube channel,great too!)
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Post by Cory Trese on Mar 14, 2012 1:44:51 GMT -5
I have updated the ST current page to try to include some of the feedback we got here.
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Post by grävling on Mar 15, 2012 9:16:38 GMT -5
(thought I posted this, but seems I didn't, or it didn't arrive) www.tresebrothers.com/blog/cyber-knights-building-your-teamThese specialized fixers focus on connecting new or veteran talent with Knights, and each Persona Fix will have a special pool of Runners they can provide. --> Persona Fixers connect new or veteran talent with Knights. Each Persona Fixer is specialised, with access to a pool of Runners of a particular type. (I think this is a little more clear.) www.tresebrothers.com/blog/cyber-knights-gear-and-cybernetic-implants/re: "Across the planet, Mars Inc is known as the premiere producer of the most advanced and deadly weaponry." Then across the planet is _mistaken_ -- Yakashima has the edge, I believe. Mars has the edge in armour. And shouldn't that be Fairlight? Amongst the mega-corporations, Yakashima is hailed as the premiere producer of all computer technology, while AzTek and their subsidiary Frontline Medical are recognized as the provider of the highest quality medical gear. I think Yakashima has the edge in medical tech as well. Of course, it is ok for world opinion to be _wrong_ but if you intend for world opinion to be correct then some adjusting as to who sells what seems in order. What I think we have is a situation where competition (including industrial espionage) has levelled the playing field, so these days it is hard to say who has the edge in cyberware, or weapons. It is clear that one can argue that the Mars Hunter Sight is the best rifle -- but one can also argue that the Yakashima Mk251 Bounty is the best. And in a guide intended for beginners, a hint towards the Mk251 Bounty is probably best, because it is the new characters who need to purchase the more accurate rifle. I think you should put a paragraph in about cheap knock-offs flooding the realm, which makes it necessary for a CK to read beyond the label and look at the actual numbers on equpment they propose to buy. They will find things that have the same name perform differently depending on where they buy them. --------------- www.tresebrothers.com/blog/cyber-knights-factions/s/as the destructive and greedy force/as desctructive and greedy/ if it *is* difficult to deny, then s/we may not have survived the end fo the world/we would not have survived the end of the world/ (and see that 'of' is not spelled 'fo' regardless). But if a certain amount of denying is going on then ...few deny that we would not have survived the end of the world. The question is, who blames the MegaCorps for the end of the world? And who thinks that the 'end of the worldä is not an event in the immediate past, but the even more immediate future?? s/subsidiaries and citizens still security services/subsidiaries and citizens still rely on security services/ s/The Fennian have been around/The Fennians have been around/ s/Blue Ox,w ho have a reputation for being hardcore paramilitary/Blue Ox, who have a reputation for being a hardcore paramilitary/ (note 2 fixes) s/The free streets/The Free Streets/ |
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Post by fallen on Mar 17, 2012 9:21:47 GMT -5
grävling - as always, thank you thank you! All reported errors fixed and new suggestions incorporated.
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