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Post by fallen on Aug 21, 2013 12:03:22 GMT -5
darkhunter - great post! Hope you keep writing his log!
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Post by darkhunter on Aug 21, 2013 19:08:11 GMT -5
//loading file two//
When I get to the command center I get a call from Texas Powers.He said"Is this Captain Jackson"."no captain Jackson is dead"I said."well than who is this"."I am Lt.Sarrin 2nd in command"."oh you well I heard about the attack from Knights Horizon and I'm coming"he said."I was planning of a counter-attack but I'm going to need some help" I said."ok I'll bring Foxtrot team"he said."ok meet me at the command center" I said.When he gets to the command center he said"ok so whats this counter-attack plan u where talking about"?"well I say we attack where their defense is weak and that's at back bay slums".
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Post by darkhunter on Aug 21, 2013 23:58:51 GMT -5
finishing the rest later
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Post by abysmal on Aug 22, 2013 8:51:49 GMT -5
A great read, but there are 6 teams, unless one is eliminated.
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Post by darkhunter on Aug 22, 2013 12:33:37 GMT -5
Ok I fixed the mistake
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Post by darkhunter on Aug 22, 2013 12:35:19 GMT -5
//loading File One// My name is Lt.Sarrin and I am a Sniper. I am a Ranking officer in Brave Star's Cyber Ops , a special army of Cyber Knight Teams. There are six teams. Alpha team, Bravo team, Charlie team, Delta team, Echo team and, Foxtrot team. Alpha team fights against The Blue ox. Bravo team fights against The Fennian. Charlie team fights against The Los Valentinos. Delta team fights against Knights Horizon. Echo team fights against The Streets.Foxtrot fights against The Yakuza. I am 2nd in command in Delta team. This is the story of the Siege of Knights Horizon. It the year of 2169 When It happened. I Was at the barracks waiting for my next orders when alarms around the base stared ringing and I knew that ment only one thing, Knights Horizon was attacking the base. I run out side and go to the armory and grabbed a Sniper and my gear and head for Cpt.Jackson. The Captain tells me and the other Snipers to get up on the walls and snipe. Then He told The Cyberswords and the Gunslingers to go out side the gate and defend. I run to take my position on the wall. I start firing my sniper at attacking soldiers untill a Sniper threatens to kill me. I dodge the shot and fire back killing him with a headshot. Killing more targets left and right than as I look to the firefight down below I spot the commanding officer under cover being guned down by a Knights horizon Droid Squad. The droid squad leaves the Captain dead In his own pool of blood. Seeing him there I knew that since I'm 2nd in command I was in command of Delta team now. These people's lives are in my hands.Yelling out loud I say "EVERYONE REGROUP TO BASE". Everyone came running to me and I say "LISTEN UP EVERYONE KNIGHTS HORIZON MY HAVE ATTACKED US BY SURPRISE BUT THAT DOES NOT MEAN THAT WILL JUST LET THEM WALZ RIGHT IN HERE AND TAKE THIS BASE,NO WE FIGHT TO THE DEATH FOR BRAVE STAR".Everyone says"FOR BRAVE STAR ". I say "NOW GET OUT THERE AND SHOW THEM WHO'S BEST". Then I Start barking out orders to everyone.One soldier came to me and said"good pep talk commander". When everyone had a order I went to the Sniper position and started killing again untill the Knights Horizon soldiers retreated. I told everyone to go back to there barracks and rest for the next battle while I go to the command center. Battle was over for now.
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Post by Jacob on Aug 25, 2013 16:22:56 GMT -5
Good read, but: Format! Space after a Dot, after a comma etc. Otherwise it's hard to read, very hard to read.
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Post by relower on Oct 6, 2014 17:15:03 GMT -5
Hello everyone Im back on the forums again but under a different username.I will start fixing these stories and making some new ones on a new topic page.
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Post by fallen on Oct 6, 2014 17:30:34 GMT -5
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Post by relower on Oct 6, 2014 18:41:42 GMT -5
I will probably work on new stories besides The Police Files.
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