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Post by grävling on Dec 2, 2014 11:15:16 GMT -5
Castle Rumor
s/are less expense to operate/are less expensive to operate/
s/and usually/and are usually/
(and if you mean 'easier to navigate and sail' when you say 'simpler to Captain' perhaps you should say that. Or is firing the guns easier as well? I haven't noticed.)
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Post by grävling on Dec 2, 2014 11:19:53 GMT -5
Castle Rumor
s/Sometimes the Letter of Reprisal/Sometimes a Letter of Reprisal/
since you already have used 'Reprisal' s/take reprisals/take sanctions/ perhaps? Just stylistic....
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Post by grävling on Dec 2, 2014 11:22:47 GMT -5
castle rumor
s/for many things. Trade, protection/for many things -- trade, protection/ or /for many things, including trade, protection/
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Post by grävling on Dec 2, 2014 11:30:47 GMT -5
Castle rumors
s/The Navy is the most direct opportunity for a Captain/Serving in the Navy is the most direct way for a Captain/
since I am proposing to add 'Serving' you might want to s/his services/his abilities/
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Post by grävling on Dec 2, 2014 11:40:11 GMT -5
Castle Rumors
s/beggars, murderers they/beggars, and murderers! They/
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Post by grävling on Dec 2, 2014 11:44:25 GMT -5
Tavern Rumors
s/Something in the irony of a port called/There is something ironic that the port is called/
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Post by grävling on Dec 2, 2014 11:57:31 GMT -5
Trying to salvage a wreck
s/its clear there might have been more/it's clear that there might have been more/ or /it's clear than you might have found more/
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Post by grävling on Dec 2, 2014 12:02:40 GMT -5
Hall of Records
Master Explorer and Global Prestige and Infamous Warrior
s/Unlock/Unlocks/
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Post by fallen on Dec 2, 2014 13:30:06 GMT -5
Posted here for developer sanity: Elite Solider & Veteran Soldier (both wrong) s/less than/fewer than/ And I actually think that it is '9 or fewer' (no more than 9) and '15 or fewer' (no more than 15) -- at any rate I seem to have received the award and I am pretty sure I rejected 9 of them to check this. The text using 'less' is still here. s/less/fewer/ I would change it to: No more than 9 Commissions may be rejected, failed, or allowed to expire. and No more than 15 Commissions may be rejected, failed, or allowed to expire. Read more: startradersrpg.proboards.com/thread/10043/v1-2-13-typos#ixzz3KlafCnkP |
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Post by grävling on Dec 2, 2014 15:27:09 GMT -5
ooops, i posted that in the wrong place? if so, sorry ...
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Post by fallen on Dec 2, 2014 15:52:05 GMT -5
grävling - np, it was in response to a place where I had claimed to fix it. Any forum thread I haven't resolved I keep open in a tab. So, moving it here means on less tab for me!
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Post by grävling on Dec 2, 2014 15:54:06 GMT -5
ah, ok then.  |
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Post by grävling on Dec 2, 2014 20:22:50 GMT -5
damaged mast
s/becomes worse/becomes worse./
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Post by grävling on Dec 3, 2014 13:48:10 GMT -5
successfully salvaging a wreck
s/a number of valuables/a number of valuable/
s/water logged/waterlogged/
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Post by grävling on Dec 3, 2014 13:56:10 GMT -5
As a Captain
s/captured and looted X/captured and looted X times/
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