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Post by fallen on Dec 3, 2014 22:28:31 GMT -5
This thread is reserved for commentary on the Silence of Snow story, found here - startradersrpg.proboards.com/thread/10175/silence-snowBeautiful short story - love it. I love the grimness you've found in Gholla Outlook, where there will be another siege, year after year. |
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Post by En1gma on Dec 3, 2014 22:35:55 GMT -5
Thanks!! (There's more, btw, she is just getting started) I've been thinking about Gholla Outlook since I beat it, and this story is what came from it, for me. She has a long road in front of her, for sure, poor lady...
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Post by mrsarfa on Dec 4, 2014 11:56:27 GMT -5
En1gma - This is awesome. I got chills reading it. The Gholla Outlook sequence was definitely my favorite part of the game (so far!) and you've more than done it justice. Seriously, seriously great job. 
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Post by En1gma on Dec 4, 2014 12:21:57 GMT -5
Thanks for the compliments everyone, but seeing as I plan to have this be a longer story, I'd like to have the comments in this thread (Is there any way an admin could move those comments here please?) This poor lady, I feel bad for her, and I'm the one whose writing it... I just don't know if I should have her go it alone, or let her have some company/companions... I was thinking about an archer, or mage, but I don't want to lose the feel of having the deafening silence of seclusion around her... I'll think about it, I have the Let's Play to write up tonight, but thoughts are always welcome! |
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Post by fallen on Dec 4, 2014 12:29:59 GMT -5
En1gma - I have moved the posted, but it popped them out of order.
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Post by En1gma on Dec 4, 2014 12:32:32 GMT -5
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Post by John Robinson on Dec 6, 2014 12:38:04 GMT -5
Hunting down Wolf Lords! This woman is seriously determined or driven insane with the thirst for revenge, maybe both? Great job! |
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Post by En1gma on Dec 6, 2014 12:52:33 GMT -5
Thanks, John Robinson! This poor woman has been through so much, I'm really excited to continue this story, and she has quite the story to tell. |
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Post by ntsheep on Dec 6, 2014 12:55:47 GMT -5
I'd like to leave a comment, but every time I stop looking at the story I forget about it  What's this about again? |
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Post by En1gma on Dec 6, 2014 12:57:27 GMT -5
You. Shall not. Derail! /slams staff down.
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Post by ntsheep on Dec 6, 2014 13:04:17 GMT -5
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Post by En1gma on Dec 11, 2014 13:03:44 GMT -5
Is it bad if I'm actually getting emotional writing this story? I feel like pain is something I know a lot about (hard childhood, I'll spare you the details  ), and this story is almost therapeutic in a strange way. I hope it's as good to read as it is to write, because I'm truly enjoying myself with this one, much more so than my other stories. |
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Post by En1gma on Dec 12, 2014 21:21:36 GMT -5
Back to it. Hopefully I can get a new chapter up tonight...
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Post by mrsarfa on Dec 15, 2014 14:26:42 GMT -5
Back to it. Hopefully I can get a new chapter up tonight... Getting better and better. Keep it up! |
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Post by En1gma on Jan 17, 2015 19:42:56 GMT -5
Can't play Heroes? Hopefully Silence can help fill the void left until it gets patched up... Working on another chapter to post tonight, stay tuned!
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What's this about again?
), and this story is almost therapeutic in a strange way. I hope it's as good to read as it is to write, because I'm truly enjoying myself with this one, much more so than my other stories.