Thanks!! (There's more, btw, she is just getting started) I've been thinking about Gholla Outlook since I beat it, and this story is what came from it, for me. She has a long road in front of her, for sure, poor lady...
En1gma - This is awesome. I got chills reading it. The Gholla Outlook sequence was definitely my favorite part of the game (so far!) and you've more than done it justice. Seriously, seriously great job.
Thanks for the compliments everyone, but seeing as I plan to have this be a longer story, I'd like to have the comments in this thread (Is there any way an admin could move those comments here please?)
This poor lady, I feel bad for her, and I'm the one whose writing it... I just don't know if I should have her go it alone, or let her have some company/companions... I was thinking about an archer, or mage, but I don't want to lose the feel of having the deafening silence of seclusion around her... I'll think about it, I have the Let's Play to write up tonight, but thoughts are always welcome!
Is it bad if I'm actually getting emotional writing this story? I feel like pain is something I know a lot about (hard childhood, I'll spare you the details ), and this story is almost therapeutic in a strange way. I hope it's as good to read as it is to write, because I'm truly enjoying myself with this one, much more so than my other stories.