Post by anrdaemon on Apr 26, 2015 12:12:52 GMT -5
Syndicate Rychart(description):
"… Rychart is a known for using…" - "a" is in error here.
Tutorial text(s):
"To move one of your three colony ships, selected it by tapping on it."
"Other higher priority projects may inter[r?]upt your construction…"
"We would have been lucky to have truly settle[d?]…" - but overall, the phrase could use a rewrite. May be.
"Now[,?] that the Factions have their own fiefdoms again, friction between them threatens [with?] conflict."
"… Rychart is a known for using…" - "a" is in error here.
Tutorial text(s):
"To move one of your three colony ships, selected it by tapping on it."
"Other higher priority projects may inter[r?]upt your construction…"
"We would have been lucky to have truly settle[d?]…" - but overall, the phrase could use a rewrite. May be.
"Now[,?] that the Factions have their own fiefdoms again, friction between them threatens [with?] conflict."
