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Post by anrdaemon on May 5, 2015 12:09:42 GMT -5
Let's continue our crusade against evil creepy things that creep into the beautiful product. Tutorial (still, ahha x.x): Advisor infomation on Spice. (I'm not liking the word "spice". Just sayin'.) "… In large populations, spice trade, use, and the Spice Halls is an integral part of life." - the jump from spice to halls is nowhere explained. Also the spice itself is explained WAY too late, when you already had figured that you in fact need to know about it like a year or two ago. Tutorial on core upgrades availability: "Core upgrades are de onted by their red icon, as opposed to standard upgrades that use an orange build icon." "on" -> "no", also should probably lose the "build" word, as it has no relevance. And may be add that the core upgrades are "denoted by their red icon and an asterisk appended to the upgrade name". Speaking of which (an asterisk), it is spaced too far out on almost all fonts, and on some fonts looks as just a small indistinguishable dot. (I.e. in the tutorial slide illustration.) Ship abilities "tooltip". (This also applies to the Heroes of Steel, and probably other games, as the wording looks WAY too familiar.) In case of 4x Empires, the tooltip bottom line says "To use, select Talent and tap a nearby enemy ship on the map." (In case of HoS, the line almost completely identical with exception of target reference.) I see a number of issues with the text. First, and most apparent, this is not a "Talent" in game terms, it is "Training". The other is more subtle, but also apparent, if you give it a thought. You've already selected the ability. You can't select an already selected one. I suggest to change the wording to "Tap a nearby <action target> to use selected <Ability>." |
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Post by anrdaemon on May 5, 2015 13:24:24 GMT -5
Designer 1/8: "Ship Ship Materials to spend".
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Post by Kanly on May 21, 2015 8:38:11 GMT -5
2.2.15 on the tutorial Default optoin is double-lined Should be option imgur.com/5tAnHZZ |
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Post by Kanly on May 21, 2015 12:11:24 GMT -5
Tutorial typo "Improving an upgrade has a build cost, just like buidling a new upgrade." Building m.imgur.com/44KJU76 |
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Post by Kanly on May 21, 2015 12:15:22 GMT -5
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Post by fallen on May 21, 2015 13:21:51 GMT -5
Let's continue our crusade against evil creepy things that creep into the beautiful product. Tutorial (still, ahha x.x): Advisor infomation on Spice. (I'm not liking the word "spice". Just sayin'.) "… In large populations, spice trade, use, and the Spice Halls is an integral part of life." - the jump from spice to halls is nowhere explained. Also the spice itself is explained WAY too late, when you already had figured that you in fact need to know about it like a year or two ago. Tutorial on core upgrades availability: "Core upgrades are de onted by their red icon, as opposed to standard upgrades that use an orange build icon." "on" -> "no", also should probably lose the "build" word, as it has no relevance. And may be add that the core upgrades are "denoted by their red icon and an asterisk appended to the upgrade name". Speaking of which (an asterisk), it is spaced too far out on almost all fonts, and on some fonts looks as just a small indistinguishable dot. (I.e. in the tutorial slide illustration.) Ship abilities "tooltip". (This also applies to the Heroes of Steel, and probably other games, as the wording looks WAY too familiar.) In case of 4x Empires, the tooltip bottom line says "To use, select Talent and tap a nearby enemy ship on the map." (In case of HoS, the line almost completely identical with exception of target reference.) I see a number of issues with the text. First, and most apparent, this is not a "Talent" in game terms, it is "Training". The other is more subtle, but also apparent, if you give it a thought. You've already selected the ability. You can't select an already selected one. I suggest to change the wording to "Tap a nearby <action target> to use selected <Ability>." Thx, fixed the typos that make sense for next. The game term is "order" as of the new tutorial release. |
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Post by fallen on May 21, 2015 13:22:56 GMT -5
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Post by fallen on May 21, 2015 13:26:05 GMT -5
Tutorial typo "Improving an upgrade has a build cost, just like buidling a new upgrade." Building m.imgur.com/44KJU76Fixed for next. |
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Post by fallen on May 21, 2015 13:27:56 GMT -5
2.2.15 on the tutorial Default optoin is double-lined Should be option imgur.com/5tAnHZZFixed for next! |
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Post by Kanly on May 21, 2015 13:45:47 GMT -5
Library->Ship designs->Colony Hives
Typo in the first line of the second paragraph.
"During the initial the gravity jump"
Repeated word (the)
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Post by Kanly on May 21, 2015 14:16:12 GMT -5
Also, in the turn events list:
A 'alliance' has ended.
Should be an.
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Post by Kanly on May 22, 2015 7:20:41 GMT -5
Typo in the tech tree under planetary defense 3:
FDF Battlforce
Should be battleforce?
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Post by fallen on May 25, 2015 0:19:30 GMT -5
Also, in the turn events list: A 'alliance' has ended. Should be an. The string reads: "A new 'Alliance' has started." I don't think a change is needed. |
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Post by fallen on May 25, 2015 0:22:28 GMT -5
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