Post by bobc on Jul 5, 2015 9:19:00 GMT -5
Level 1:
In the opening sequence just before the knight starts moving.......
Knight - I can't reach the main deck elevator - this corridor suffered a direct hit.
Kathos - In that case, blade, there is a scattered fighting force left on that deck.
* Should 'blade' be replaced with 'corporal' or 'Templar' in line with previous instances?
Level 2:
There are two pieces of dialogue where the Tact Point is being called a Power Node. The first is at the start when the elevator doors open and Luthor says 'There! An operating power node. The second is at the end when Kathos says reinforcements are on the way to hold the two power nodes.
This could be confusing since every other piece of dialogue calls them Tact Points. Also, some of the relays in L3 are called power nodes. For clarity, would it be possible to revise the two pieces of L2 dialogue to say Tact Point instead of power node?
Level 4:
At the start of the level just before the xeno arrive the Captain warns they will come from all directions. He says they need to form a defensive circle, then calls on the knights to form a phalanx.
A phalanx is a rectangle, not a circle. Perhaps the Captain could say they need to adopt a defensive posture and then call on the knights to form a defensive circle?
In the opening sequence just before the knight starts moving.......
Knight - I can't reach the main deck elevator - this corridor suffered a direct hit.
Kathos - In that case, blade, there is a scattered fighting force left on that deck.
* Should 'blade' be replaced with 'corporal' or 'Templar' in line with previous instances?
Level 2:
There are two pieces of dialogue where the Tact Point is being called a Power Node. The first is at the start when the elevator doors open and Luthor says 'There! An operating power node. The second is at the end when Kathos says reinforcements are on the way to hold the two power nodes.
This could be confusing since every other piece of dialogue calls them Tact Points. Also, some of the relays in L3 are called power nodes. For clarity, would it be possible to revise the two pieces of L2 dialogue to say Tact Point instead of power node?
Level 4:
At the start of the level just before the xeno arrive the Captain warns they will come from all directions. He says they need to form a defensive circle, then calls on the knights to form a phalanx.
A phalanx is a rectangle, not a circle. Perhaps the Captain could say they need to adopt a defensive posture and then call on the knights to form a defensive circle?
