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Post by Cory Trese on Jan 5, 2011 13:13:47 GMT -5
I just realized that the "Create Cache" and "Locate Cache" game text is terrible.
Anyone want to comment on what it should contain?
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Post by wormholewillie on Jan 5, 2011 13:27:07 GMT -5
Create Cache: While it pains me to leave these goods unattended, it cannot be helped. With luck, I will return for them, and find my stockpile intact.
Locate Cache: By the stars, I hope my stash is untouched, and where I left it. It should be right over here...
(Not the best game text ever written, but possibly useful to inspire others.)
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Post by Kelvin Zero on Jan 5, 2011 22:33:22 GMT -5
Do you mean the text for when you are placing a new Cache or finding your old Cache? I never really had a problem with it.
It could be handy to have rotating text for them. Some examples could be:
Creating Cache: "Let's try this cave that looks like a giant mouth!" "No, I don't think a sign saying 'the cache is not here' would work." "Okay everyone remember where we parked!"
Locating Cache: "It's just a jump to the left..." "Did we bury it under the giant X or the giant Y?" "Okay, who's idea was the giant blinking sign saying 'Captain's loot buried here'?" "Um, I really don't remember burying fifteen men and a bottle of rum with the treasure. Who's idea was that?"
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