2.1.17 Text Issues

[Vae Victus]

PC
Hard Difficulty
2.1.17

Cut Scene before the Galantia Cross missions (chose to deploy NOT at the capitol).
"our duty is strike at the root..."
TO
"our duty is to strike at the root"
Also
The last two displaying "head talk" scenes just showed my captain's head with no text...not sure if that is an error or if text was supposed to show.


Righteous Fallen: Patrol Orbit

A speech option with the Paladin: "Is it possible that the Throll is mistaken."
The "the" is likely a mistake.
NOTE: It is possible that I am imagining the "the"... I clicked through and only noticed it in passing.

Paladin:
"It could simply have been Star Trader smuggler's communicating...."
TO
"It could simply have been Star Trader smugglers communicating...."
NOTE:
Not sure why there was a possessive

The mission before Ferari Cargo: Atmo Reentry
OLD
Mariale: "Of course, but there a few things..."
TO
Mariale: "Of course, but there are a few things..."


Cut scene after Ferari Cargo: Atmo Reentry:

OLD
"...the the scientist Mariale..."
NEW
"...the scientist, Mariale..."
NOTE
Two 'the's


Drop Zone on Galantia (the mini cut scene after winning)
Prince Tarquin: "while you siege..."
TO
"while you besiege..."
OR
"while you lay siege to..."

Ferari Cargo: Atmo Reentry

OLD was something like:
"to avoid the main nest of the xeno."
TO
"to avoid the xeno's main nest."
NOTE
The old version sounds clunky. There are a few occasions of language similar to the above I did not comment on because I realize some of the rationale for its inclusion is stylistic, but the "old" statement here could flow better. As is, it takes a reader out of the scene.

[fallen]

Vae Victus - the closest I can find on the first one is: "Is it possible that Officer Throll is mistaken?" which looks correct to me.

Thanks, the rest are fixed!

[Vae Victus]

May 15, 2016 11:13:25 GMT -5 fallen said:

Vae Victus - the closest I can find on the first one is: "Is it possible that Officer Throll is mistaken?" which looks correct to me.

Thanks, the rest are fixed!

Ah, then it was probably a case of me clicking through and imagining a phantom word (which I noted as a possibility in the note--I would have gone back and checked but I had already clicked past the words).

Thank you for the fixes- I hope they improve the experience for players! I at least am happy to see the fixes.

That one was actually the second one in the list- the first one is reproduced below here (just in case it was missed-it was added in a few minutes after the post was made).

Cut Scene before the Galantia Cross missions (chose to deploy NOT at the capitol).
"our duty is strike at the root..."
TO
"our duty is to strike at the root"
Also
The last two displaying "head talk" scenes just showed my captain's head with no text...not sure if that is an error or if text was supposed to show.

[fallen]

Killer - fixed both the typo and the two odd face-with-no-text occurences!