Ep1/ Escape from Red Hill Dungeons/ Text corrections (minor)

[Nathan]

I believe these are reverse order of occurrence:

Selen
No matter what the cause, we are stuck here, in the middle of it.
- No matter what the cause is, we are stuck here, in the middle of it.
OR
- No matter what the cause, we are stuck here, in the middle of it.

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Kincaid
He's looks frail to the eye, but that one has a strong heart.
- He's looks frail to the eye, but that one has a strong heart.
OR
- He's looks frail to the eye, but that one has a strong heart.

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Selen
When we reach Kern's Highway, we should travel to Oskahold together.  The four of us should stick together.
- When we reach Kern's Highway, we should travel to Oskahold together. The four of us should stick together.

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The bearded general (don't remember the correct spelling of his name)
We brought enough strength to ensure you'd surrender peaceably.
- We brought enough strength to ensure you'd surrender peacefully.

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Mugus Lazzon
But flattery is not enough. To ensure that you serve your Baron faithfully and without any more mistakes...
- But flattery is not enough. To Ensure that you serve your Baron faithfully and without any more mistakes...

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[amongstshadows]

The Lazzon text is correct. After he says that he calls for the war hunds. He's saying that he's bringing hunds, and orkin, and the captain to make sure they don't fail again

[Nathan]

amongstshadows - thanks for catching that

[fallen]

Thanks all fixed