Black Market card game, draw of an Access (Level 3) card:
description: Successfully reach anminor illegal trading house, as if we had Full Trader Permit (I would argue that Level 3 & 4 are not trivial, and therefore shouldn't be described as 'minor'.)
results text for successful draw: Our attempt to access to the illegal trading house took <TIME>.
(Or you could fix the second sentence to be singular. But they have to agree.) s/high tech/high-tech/
I sort of want to say 'focus on repair and maintenance' -- but isn't that what a mechanic does? I would have thought that the thing that distinguished an engineer from a mechanic was that the engineer didn't focus on repair; he just understood the whole matter more thoroughly.
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s/him/he/ s/onboard/he is on board/ s/him/his/ s/officially/publicly/ s/the// s/publicly/officially/
(You have to deliver him publicly, in order to make it official, I think. Otherwise they could deny everything and lose any relevant paperwork. Or perhaps I misunderstand?)
Once we arrive and start doing the mission, this screen would read better if:
'We are here to welcome...' was the first sentence, and 'Once on board (not onboard)...' was the second.
When you unload him:
He's not a Mysterious Passenger. We know all about him.
Last Edit: Mar 19, 2017 1:20:55 GMT -5 by grävling
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And, since the battle was _over_ I was actually looking to see if disputes with Clan Zenrin was having any effect on De Valtos, whose zone we were in, so sort of wanted a report that said "We lost 2 reputation with Clan Zenrin for shooting torpedoes at them, but de Valtos, despite being in a trade alliance with Clan Zenrin, didn't care".
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