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Post by grävling on Jan 9, 2012 3:08:21 GMT -5
Autogun description
I don't understand 'the Autogun is mean crooked into the elbow'
meant to be held?? carried??
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Post by fallen on Jan 9, 2012 14:51:19 GMT -5
I can't help but dance around in my chair and be excited. I just finished all your typos again (including the Cava Saint one)... and I feel like the flood is finally abating.
After weeks of your hard work, gravling, I think we finally have pretty good English in the NBZ! My hat is off to you!
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Post by grävling on Jan 9, 2012 14:54:50 GMT -5
I think so, as well.
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Post by grävling on Jan 9, 2012 17:48:39 GMT -5
Gateway Security Post
s/to insure that security/in ensuring that security/
s/its own levels/their own levels/
s/and we do not allow their type to pass through here/therefore we only allow citizens through here/ (or something. 'their type' doesn't refer to either the danger or the levels, so the sentence as written is hard to parse.)
s/Right this way sir/Right this way, sir/
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Post by grävling on Jan 9, 2012 18:02:26 GMT -5
AzTek Commerce Center
s/with your purchase/with your purchases/
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Post by grävling on Jan 9, 2012 18:05:45 GMT -5
Sometimes you are attacked by a group that in the pop-up is called
'Yakuza Tatoo Artists'
s/Tatoo/Tattoo/
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Post by grävling on Jan 9, 2012 18:41:59 GMT -5
Howling Sea Inn
s/Dorechester/Dorchester/
s/who you mess with/whom you mess with/
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Post by grävling on Jan 9, 2012 21:27:28 GMT -5
Church of St Patrick (Dorcester)
s/welcome into his house/welcome in His house/
s/way of the lord/way of the Lord/
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Post by grävling on Jan 10, 2012 17:18:13 GMT -5
Texas Powers conversations
s/for you to reap in the banks/for you to reap rewards you can bank/
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Post by fallen on Jan 10, 2012 21:05:16 GMT -5
All resolved up to this point! Thanks!
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Post by grävling on Jan 12, 2012 18:56:55 GMT -5
Victor conversation
s/whet your whistle/wet your whistle/
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Post by grävling on Jan 12, 2012 19:19:14 GMT -5
Self Defense Store s/Mitshahuma/  (whatever you wanted him to say) |
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Post by grävling on Jan 13, 2012 4:40:24 GMT -5
Yakashima Medical Services s/../ (whatever you want him to say) |
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Post by grävling on Jan 13, 2012 18:10:42 GMT -5
Los Valentinos Den
The speaker is still identified as 'Los Valentines Ganger'
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Post by grävling on Jan 13, 2012 22:58:49 GMT -5
using the yakuza pass to yakashima (on the button)
s/lets/let's/
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(whatever you wanted him to say)