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Post by grävling on Jan 14, 2012 1:26:05 GMT -5
Mars Corp Data Sheet (Investor Readout) s/fits their/fit their/ s/customer's/customers'/ s/uses strategies/use strategy/ s/protects Mars/protect Mars/ s/phase of business/phase of the business/ The whole thing is written very badly, which of course makes it sound exactly like so many actual corporate vision statements I have read over the years. Congrats, you have the pointless buzzword style down cold.  |
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Post by grävling on Jan 14, 2012 3:30:33 GMT -5
Laughing Dog Bar
s/Do all Cyber Knights works/Do all Cyber Knights work/
also, about 4 times you have it written 'Cyber Knights' with the space and about 4 times you have it written 'CyberKnights' (no space). Pick one and use it, and I think that the version with the space is the way it is spelled most often in the game.
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Post by grävling on Jan 14, 2012 3:36:30 GMT -5
E-Street Pharmacy
s/May some that are willing/Maybe some that are willing/
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Post by grävling on Jan 14, 2012 6:17:37 GMT -5
Yakuza Hideout
The place is spelled correctly on the map, but when you enter the building, the text at the top of the screen says 'Yakuza Hidout' (missing 'e' in 'Hideout') It is spelled wrong in your computer, too, when you have a mission to go there.
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Post by grävling on Jan 14, 2012 14:32:22 GMT -5
I just got jumped by 1 LV gang member and a single urban hunter robot.
The Pop-up read 'Los Valentino'.
If you want the singular you want 'El Valentino'. (The Valentino) or 'En Valentino' (A Valentino) or even *A Valentino'.
p.s. I am not sure I like it that gang members now have robots, though a single urban hunter cannot do much. I'm more worried about the Drones the Fennians have got a hold of.
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Post by grävling on Jan 14, 2012 18:22:16 GMT -5
Church of St. Patrick (in Southie)
s/you are a instrument/you are an instrument/
s/ is. . ./is . . ./
s/use to be/used to be/
s/Ithan you'd imagine, I'd wager/than you imagine, I'd wager/
(or) /than you'd imagine, I'll wager/
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Post by grävling on Jan 14, 2012 18:37:08 GMT -5
Church of St. Thomas
You get the generic message 'I would like to browse your medical catalog' -- but this is to a squatter living in a heap of rubble. If you want to buy stims and medkits from him, you would probably say something else.
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Post by grävling on Jan 14, 2012 18:47:31 GMT -5
MT Hunting Rifle
s/still delivery its rounds/still delivering its rounds/
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Post by grävling on Jan 15, 2012 13:53:47 GMT -5
Motel 10
I am greeted by 'Hello Sir'
but this character is female. 'Hello There' instead, perhaps?
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Post by grävling on Jan 17, 2012 21:05:38 GMT -5
'Fenian War Hawks' -- Pop-up with the gang name spelled that way.
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Post by fallen on Jan 18, 2012 2:02:56 GMT -5
grävling - thanks for reporting the abnormalities in the battle-groups. Per the next release, a lot of that is fixed, but I am not sure that I got them all. The only gang that is supposed to have drones is Fennians, which will now used a salvaged drone, which is a very weak variety of the Predator drone. And they show up pretty rarerly.
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Post by fallen on Jan 19, 2012 5:06:43 GMT -5
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