Typos Update #280

[terrikk]

Not sure if we should be aggregating all typo reports into the megathreads MTKnife creates , but here's a few I just noticed.

In the mission titled "Nomadic Defender":

- in the text for mission step 1.1: "We could 2 execute Patrols in orbit here to help calm the void". In other mission steps, the wording is "We could execute 2 Patrols", which is presumably the correct version.
- in the text for mission step 3.1: "... enemies encroaching at Antuoch have gained attention of the ." There seems to be one or more words missing at the end of that sentence.  

[fallen]

It is appreciated that all typos are posted into megathreads using the version of the current update ("Typos Update #280").

Thanks for posting these, will fix.

[MTKnife]

"Longhaul Salvage" card:

There's a "yeilds" instead of "yields".

[terrikk]

Oct 6, 2021 22:37:57 GMT -5 fallen said:

It is appreciated that all typos are posted into megathreads using the version of the current update ("Typos Update #280").

Thanks for posting these, will fix.

Will do. I had wondered if the # was a game version, but I wasn't able to match that with anything I saw in-game (on mobile, I see "3.2.9" in the upper right, which I assume is the typical semver game version). Though I see now that the # we're using for these typo threads corresponds to the update # as posted in the update announcements.

[MTKnife]

And if you're on PC, I'd check Steam rather than here--they don't always post he updates on here.

[MTKnife]

There's an extra space between "Buffs" and "and" in the "Unfaltering Ire" description.

[fallen]

Oct 7, 2021 8:38:27 GMT -5 terrikk said:

Oct 6, 2021 22:37:57 GMT -5 fallen said:

It is appreciated that all typos are posted into megathreads using the version of the current update ("Typos Update #280").

Thanks for posting these, will fix.

Will do. I had wondered if the # was a game version, but I wasn't able to match that with anything I saw in-game (on mobile, I see "3.2.9" in the upper right, which I assume is the typical semver game version). Though I see now that the # we're using for these typo threads corresponds to the update # as posted in the update announcements.

#280 = 3.2.9

There is always one Update # and one version number, paired. Update #279 = 3.2.5

I don't really mind which you post in your typo title The Update # seems more friendly to me

[fallen]

Thanks, all fixed.

[MTKnife]

In the dialog for "Internal Pressure", the opposing negotiator says "At his back." It should be "at".

[MTKnife]

In a "Refill Fuel Tanks" card result:

"Our search turned up signs of wreckage which lead back to...."

Two issues, should be:

"Our search turned up signs of wreckage that led back to...."

The "which" can be correct if there's a comma before it--it depends on whether the focus of the sentence is on the wreckage ("that") or on whatever happens in the dependent clause ("which").

[MTKnife]

Mercantile Negotiation description:

"X is working to improve economic ties with across quadrant lines...."

The "with" needs to go.

[MTKnife]

In a convo with Valencia:

"I won't stand in the way, she's a free spacer."

That comma should be a semi-colon, or preferably a colon.

[MTKnife]

So...apparently the Wing Commando Boarding Talent "Behind Enemy Lines" only works if the character is assigned as the pilot of a shuttle. The description of the Talent (and, I'm guessing, the other Wing Commando Boarding Talents as well) should really say that: I just spent two days building a crew with WC's instead of Swordsmen mostly so I could use that Talent.

EDIT: It does say that...beneath the description. Ugh.

[MTKnife]

In the "Pirate Dig" vignette:

"I know a golden wing when I see one, now I'm going to make my offer."

That comma should be a semi-colon or colon.

[fallen]

Thx all fix.